Rachel writing
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All About Rachel Writing
My other big passion (aside from craft) is writing fiction.
I've been writing stories for years but only took the idea of writing and finishing a story seriously after Nanowrimo 2006 (National Novel Writing Month).
Since then I've taken part in Nanowrimo every year - writing between 100-200K each year.
I've completed one 100k novel but have relegated it to the trunk after having a very profound change of spiritual and moral views.
I'm currently working on a story where magic is eating away at the world and hope to turn it into a free online story when its finished.
In this lens you'll find out all about my creative writing, including techniques I use to trigger ideas, books and websites I've found helpful and the sorts of things I like to write about.
Image above: My "Book Cover" for Nanowrimo 2010.
Writing and Me
Why I Write
Writing and Me
Why I Write.
Ever since I can remember I've always written stories.
My first ever story was about a horse saving all its barn yard buddies from a fire. Luckily I don't think that story has survived!
After that, for years, I wrote fanfiction about whichever celebrity I most adored at the time (I feel myself cringing saying that!) although I don't think I ever finished a story I started.
After I left university I started writing my own original characters. It started out as a romance novel set by the coast and I played about with it for a little bit, adding a few words here and there and a few characters here and there. I worked on getting that story finished during Nanowrimo 2006.
That story eventually became an urban (well, rural?) fantasy story involving selkies.
That was the story I slaved over for years, polishing it and trying to get it to make sense. I think I got it into a pretty readable state just before Nanowrimo 2010 but decided to shelve it - it wasn't what I wanted to write anymore. It was mostly a story that glorified broken characters who had dubious moral values - not something I'd want to put out into the world.
During Nanowrimo 2010 I wrote a story that was much more in line with the sorts of themes I'd want to write about now.
Fantasy is still my favourite genre and still the most fun to write.
After Nano2010 I took a pretty long break from writing whilst I got my head together and worked out where I wanted to take my writing - it's pretty hard to suddenly change everything you were doing and decide you were on the wrong path after all that work!
Now I'm back working on a new story featuring a world that's been polluted with magic.
Prompts for Writing
Using Prompts...
...to inspire stories.
A couple of years ago, my writing partner and me started choosing a new prompt each week to inspire our writing.
One week she would choose a prompt and the next week it would be my turn and so on.
Originally we started writing one short story each based on every prompt.
Below is a list of our first 5 prompts ever. Maybe one day I'll even get the courage to clean up those short stories and post them!
1. The Victory by Phoebe Anna Traquair.
2. A painting of a nun and novices on bicycles by Remedios Varo.
3. Wanderer above the Sea of Fog by Caspar David Friedrich.
4. A quote from the film "Constantine": "When we were girls we would leave each other messages, in light and breath."
5. A quote from the film "Donnie Darko": "Sometimes I'm afraid that you'll tell me that this is not a work of fiction. I can only hope that the answers will come to me in my sleep."
- Phoebe Anna Traquair
- My writing partner chose "The Victory" by Irish Textiles artist Phoebe Anna Traquair for our first prompt.
- Remedios Varo
- My first choice was a painting by Remedios Varo. I don't know what this image is called but it captured our imaginations.
- The Wanderer
- My writing partner's second choice was Wanderer above the Sea of Fog by Caspar David Friedrich.
After a while we realised that most of our short stories wanted to be much longer.
We decided that we would each write a novel - with each chapter being inspired by a new prompt each week.
Those stories started off with the photo below.
Above: My prompt-inspired novel started out with a poor family who lived in this hut.

We finished those original prompt stories in the first half of 2010 - mine needs a lot of work if I decide to go back to it one day.
Early in 2011 we decided to get back into swapping prompts again and I started a new story - I made the image opposite as a "book cover" for the new prompt-based story.
Check out my writing blog (further down this page) to find out where I am in the story.
Nanowrimo
NanoWrimo
I need a deadline!
I doubt that you haven't heard of it, but if not, National Novel Writing Month takes place every November. It's a challenge where you have to write 50,000 words in a month.
When I tell "non-believers" about it, they ask me what you win at the end. Well, you win a first draft, a sense of achievement and the first step on the ladder to the ultimate dream (at least for me!): publishing your very own book!
I know a lot of people in the publishing industry sneer at National Novel Writing Month but I would not have a manuscript to work on now if I hadn't taken part in that month-long writing challenge.
I love NanoWrimo!
It's important to remember that a month of quick writing is just the very beginning of writing a novel.
I've taken part in Nanowrimo every year since 2006 and plan to again this November. In my first year I wrote 100,000 words. The most I've managed to write is 200k (100k per story).
I use NanoWrimo as a way of getting all of my initial ideas down onto paper - my finished story is going to look nothing like my first draft but I know there's a good yarn in it somewhere!
My First Draft
A free book from Lulu.com.

I was lucky enough to be a part of Nanowrimo 2006 and get a free copy of my book from Lulu.com.
This was just my rough first draft and I've scribbled edits all over it!
I'm pretty sure I'd cringe if I read this version - I bet it barely makes sense!
Next time I "properly" finish a story I'm going to order a printed version for myself to celebrate!
My Tips for Winning Nanowrimo
I wrote this lens last year, before Nanowrimo to get myself ready for November 2010.
Books that Helped me Win Nanowrimo
No Plot? No Problem!
I read the official book the first year I attempted Nanowrimo.
No Plot? No Problem!: A Low-Stress, High-Velocity Guide to Writing a Novel in 30 Days
Amazon Price: $3.98 (as of 05/27/2012)![]()
If you're going to take part in Nanowrimo for the first time and you'll feeling a little intimidated about it all try reading this book. It really helped me and I've never failed.
Writing Down the Bones...
...by Natalie goldberg.
Writing Down the Bones: Freeing the Writer Within
Amazon Price: $7.95 (as of 05/27/2012)![]()
I adore this little book. It's full of short essays that I found really inspiring in developing my writing. I read it whilst I was working on my first Nanowrimo story and it gave me the motivation to keep writing.
Creative Brainstorming
I've come from a very arty/crafty background so I always go back to visual things to help me get over Writer's Block.
Below are a few of the things I've tried over the years.
Can't Picture Your Novel?
Make use of google images!

I'm a very visual person. I need to see something in order to describe it.
When I was really stuck with one of my stories I made a book full of laminated collages using images from google.
I've fuzzed the collage out because these aren't my images - but that doesn't matter, no one's going to see them. They're just there to help ground my story in a reality.
My Collage Book
A sneaky peek at my collages.

I haven't done this for very story but for the first draft I finished I made collages for:
Each character, including "casting an actor".
Setting and Landscape.
Scenes that gave me trouble.
I don't make collages for every little thing - I learnt that if I could describe something without needing help then I just wrote it.
Don't waste your time making something you don't need.
Make Objects
Are you stuck? Have you invented an object and now you have to invent all the details?
I wrote a character with a fabric journal.
The only trouble was my mind went blank when I tried to write about it.
I decided to make the journal so that I could describe it with ease.
Check the journal out in the lens below.
My Main Characters
Focusing my thoughts.

I've even made textiles pieces based on my characters - like the piece opposite.
Why would I bother making textiles pieces based on my novel?
Well, I'm primarily a textiles artist - that's what I know and how I think.
Making a textiles piece of a particular subject makes me focus all my thoughts on that subject.
You can get a lot of important thinking done whilst your sewing, as opposed to doing something like watching TV!
You can find out a little more about this piece on my Doodle Lens.
Making a Map
Work in progress.

This piece was going to be a sort-of map of my invented coastal village.
It was also an object in my story - a magic wall hanging. I'm a textiles artist, what else am I going to write about?!
Remember when I said about not wasting time if you didn't need the help? That's probably why I haven't finished this piece yet!
Making Maps
Recently my favourite way to start brain-storming a story is to make a map - like the one pictured below which I made for Nanowrimo 2010.
Check out the link to Holly Lisle's Map Workshop below - it's great for inventing new worlds and places.
The Art of Maps
I've even made textiles maps - check out the lens below for more map-goodness.
Editing
I've edited my way through one novel so far - and I took a long long time to do it - I'm hoping the next time will be a bit quicker!
Recently I've been using Scrivener to help organise my first drafts - Scrivener helps me organise myself after my crazy seat-of-my-pants writing.
Editing
Making notes and using post-it notes.

I like to print 4 pages to one sheet of paper because I can then see more of the story at once. This helps me work out where I need to shift a chunk of writing and also how any changes may impact something later.
I use post-it notes to write down any details that need adding.
It took me a while before I learnt that this was one of the last things you should do to edit your novel. Now I start by working out what I wanted to say and whether each scene is along the right theme or not.
If I had the money I would do Holly Lisle's How to Revise Your Novel course - it sounds awesome - even reading what happens each week in the course can steer you in the right direction!
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers...
...How to Edit Yourself Into Print.
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, Second Edition: How to Edit Yourself Into Print
Amazon Price: $5.82 (as of 05/27/2012)![]()
I think this is a really important book. It goes through all the common mistakes that writers make including things like swapping point of view, telling instead of showing and mistakes in dialogue. Very important for editing your novel.
My Writing Blog
Keep Up to Date with what I'm Working on.

Currently I'm blogging at least once a week whilst I work on my new prompt-based story.
During Nanowrimo 2010 I made a video every day and you'll find these all on my blog.
You'll find links to my most recent posts below.
Opposite: A segment from my current story's map.
My Reading and Writing Blog
Find out more.
Reading and Writing Go Hand-in-Hand
The Key to good Writing is good Reading!
My book lenses.
If I ever get stuck and feel like I can't write another word then I just pick up a good book and read a chapter.
Check out some of the books I've read and reviewed recently.
Helpful Websites
Excellent Writing Websites
Sites with info to help your writing
- Miss Snark
- This blog isn't updated anymore but it's full of very important information offered by an anonymous literary agent.
- NanoWrimo
- National Novel Writing Month.
If it wasn't for this website and it's crazy one-month deadline I wouldn't have a manuscript to edit in the first place - Holly Lisle
- Holly Lisle is amazing. This site is full of helpful information and she also has some great books available for download- about writing and fiction.
Writing Books I've found Helpful
On Writing...
...by Stephen King.
On Writing
Amazon Price: $15.89 (as of 05/27/2012)![]()
In this book Stephen King details how he became a writer and gives some great advice. This is for all writers, not just horror writers and so worth reading. King is an amazing writer. His characters are so original, he writes such a huge quantity and his plots are extraordinary. Find out how he does it!
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AddaptAbilities Mar 29, 2011 @ 3:22 pm | delete
- Best of luck with your novel!
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MeltedRachel
Mar 29, 2011 @ 3:35 pm | delete
- Thanks :)
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BFuniv.com
Mar 4, 2010 @ 7:56 pm | delete
- Congratulations. I enjoyed seeing your first draft. I just had a pdf made of my first draft of Complicit Simplicity, Hackers End Game printed so I could edit it. My son said to be sure to save it, it would be worth millions some day. Maybe your draft will sell at the same auction.
Editing went much faster once I was working with paper rather than on a computer screen. And white out makes it hard to see the courser.
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MeltedRachel
Jun 28, 2009 @ 10:02 am | in reply to qlcoach | delete
- Thanks for visiting Gary :D
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qlcoach
Jun 28, 2009 @ 9:28 am | delete
- Excellent lens about your writing talents and helpful tips to other writers. I also love to write. Met you on Lensroll. Best wishes for your success. Hope you will visit my new lens about emotional healing. Gary Eby, author and therapist.
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Textiles Artist and Writer.
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I'm Rachel, a textiles artist from the southwest of England.
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