Rattlesnake Knob, A horror Novella

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About the author

Everett Swift Was born in Rosine Kentucky. He Joined the Navy at age 17. He Married Brenda Geary Of Horse Branch while in the Navy and togather they had two daughters, Olivia and Michelle. After they Divorced he moved to Michigan in 1984 and married Karen Wootten of Hillman, MI. After their marriage they moved to Las Vegas NV where their two children Mikhail and Nakita were born. They moved back to Hillman Mi in 1993 where they still reside today. He also has seven Grandchildren.

 


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Awards

Rattlesnake Knob won the PODs editors choice award for Febuary 2006

Tuesday 13 of December, 2005
Rattlesnake Knob made top of list on zoetrope.com


Before Rattlesnake Knob became a book it was two short stories, Rattlesnake Knob and Return to Rattlesnake Knob.
I rewrote them as one story and added a third part for the book.
I am proud to announce that zoetrope.com has just released the list for the top three in the novella section for October, Rattlesnake Knob is #1 and Return to Rattlesnake Knob is #3.

Reviews

Review From POD's
Rattlesnake Knob is a horror story by Everett Swift. It's a book about three kids who encounter some strange happenings in their little town of Horse Branch, Kentucky. A "man" called Lucas Black is killing 111 people to overthrow a man named Diablo from his throne.
Yes, I know it seems confusing, but you'd have to read the book to understand. And there's no reason you shouldn't. Rattlesnake Knob is a well written, thrilling horror novel that keeps you turning the page. With only a few grammatical errors, it's professional and an all-around good read for horror fans around the globe.

Review from TCM reviews
Egart (Egg) has spent 30 years running from his past. When he was 15 years old, some extremely strange occurrences began to happen in his hometown. People began to suddenly drop dead. The only key to these mass murders was a man (or perhaps more aptly a horrible creature) who called himself Lucas Black. This dark man was out for blood and a high body count. However, once he realized Egart's abilities, Black's efforts focused on getting rid of Egart.

For the most part, Rattlesnake Knob was a well written, action filled thriller. I could have done without the protective kiss from the dying mother, a little too Harry Potter for my liking. I would have also liked to read a bit more gore being as there were so many murders in the story. Nonetheless, I liked the notion that Egart's abilities serving as a warning system and that Black chose his future victim's by examining the minds of past victims. I also liked that the first part of the story is in first person as a journal and then purposefully changes to narration to create a different point of view as the storyline changes

Review of first chapter by Melanie Leavey at Critique Circle
This has the makings of a great story. You've jumped right into the action and start generating questions in your reader's head right from the beginning...just what a first chapter is supposed to do. It has a very Stephen King-ish feel to it...which to me, is a good thing

Review form JOHN A DURLER on zeotrope.com
Rattlesnake Knob by Everett Ray Swift Lucas Black is well drawn character, and so is Mrs betty Funk, aptly named, so as not to forget the bitch. The long burning that seemed to last hours, in ten seconds sent chills up my spine.
Thank you for a rewardable read, Everettt Ray Swift. You have the makings of a block buster story here.

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Excerpt From Rattlesnake Knob

Chapter 1
Going camping

Two eighteen wheel trucks are traveling east on US 20 across Indiana at six in the morning. The driver in the second truck gets on the CB and says, "Better slow down, pumpkin truck (a trucker term used for Schneider trucks because the truck and trailer are bright orange). There is a sharp curve just ahead and an Amish buggy half way in your lane."
After the trucks get around the curve and clear of the Amish buggy, the Pumpkin truck calls back on the CB, "Thanks driver. If it hadn't been for you I would have just ran that buggy down. How did you know he was there anyway? I'm in front and I didn't see him."
"I drive this road a lot," the second driver replies. "The Amish are always traveling this part of the road."

That driver of the second truck is me. Truth is, I know things.
I know things before they happen.
I'm forty five now and I drive truck for a living (if you want to call it a living). This ol' truck is my home and the Hi-way is my doorstep. I gotta keep moving, stop for a few hours, and drive a lot more hours. If the D.O.T. ever caught me fudging my logs as much as I do they would never let me drive again.
The Department of Transportation says I have to stop for ten hours after every eleven hours of driving, or fourteen hours of work, but not me- I sleep three or four hours and drive twenty hours.
Like I said, I gotta keep moving.
I feel like if I stop for too long he will find me. All it would take is one mistake.
Thirty years have passed since it happened. It seems like forever, but at the same time it seems like yesterday.

It was Wednesday, June 6th of 1973, and I was fifteen years old when it started. No one could have ever thought it could happen, but it did, it happened, and no one would ever believe it could be true.
It was in Ohio County, Kentucky, in a little place called Arnold. Our old house sat under Rattlesnake Knob a quarter mile off the road. We were a half-mile from our nearest neighbors and the nearest town was Horse Branch, about seven miles away.
Horse Branch had about two hundred and fifty people, a post office, a school, and two small grocery stores which sold gas and pot-bellied stoves.
One store even sold ice cream by the scoop, the store keeper would dip the scoop in an old, dirty pail of water and then dip you a big one or two scoops of any of three flavors you liked into a stale cone. We had a choice of chocolate, vanilla, or strawberry.

Horse Branch started out as a booming railroad town back in the 1800's, but as the railroads downsized, Horse Branch followed in suit. It still had a railroad relay station, but only one person manned it now, and he spent most of his time sleeping and telling stories of the good ol' days to us youngsters when we stopped in to see him.
It was 8 am on Wednesday, June 6th, 1973, and old Mrs. Funk was watering her houseplants when she heard a knock on the door. She opened the door to greet a tall, slim man who was wearing hiking boots, old blue jeans, and red T-shirt that read "Here Come Da Judge" with a blue jean jacket over it.
He had long, wavy brown hair and he looked vaguely familiar, but she couldn't place when or where she had ever seen him.
No matter who he was, she could not stop looking at his black eyes.
Eyes as black as death, she thought as she choked on her words, feebly trying to ask him what he wanted and who he was. But she could not speak, not a single word.
"I am Lucas Black, Mrs. Funk. Your husband told me to say hello and that he will be seeing you today," the man informed her. His voice was frost-bite cold, the kind of tone that gave you chills along your spine and made the hairs on the back of your neck bristle.
"My husband is dead," Mrs. Funk uttered weakly. "Who the hell are you?"
"I told you my name, Betty. Your husband is in hell and he is waiting for you. It's time you paid the price for killing the unborn child you conceived from another man after you and Joe were married."
"How could you know that? I never told anyone!" She cried in disbelief.
"The Judge knows," Lucas responded coolly. "And now it's payday!"
Mrs. Funk wanted to close the door and run, but she could not move, all she could do was look into the black eyes- those awful black eyes!
She felt the breath being taken from her body and it felt like her blood was on fire, as if every nerve in her body was burning. Her muscles tensed and twisted painfully, and it seemed as though her bones were splintering by their on accord. She never imagined anyone could feel so much pain. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head and she made a strange gurgling sound, foamy spittle escaping her lips to run down her chin.
To her it felt like hours, but Mrs. Funk was dead in ten seconds. She uttered a last pleading choke as her dried and lifeless body reduced to a heap on the floor with a thud.
Lucas Black let out a satisfied moan as he looked down at Mrs. Funk's dead body lying at his feet.
"Thank you, Betty," he said, a strange sense of sincerity in his voice, "I now know the names of every person you have ever met, and in six days one hundred and eleven of them will die."

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I need honest reviews for my book, Rattlesnake Knob.
Reviews are needed for promotional purposes and reviews to let me know what is good and what is bad about the book.
Reviews need to focus on the story line, the characters, and overall writing. Also alert me to any mistakes and typos in the book.

So for all you want to be reviewers out there here is your chance.
Send me a message and with your email address and I will email you a free PDF file of the book.

Thanks, Everett

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