Write and Sell a Science Fiction Story
Genre fiction, such as Westerns, Mysteries or Science Fiction, is difficult to write. You have to know the rules of your genre. Science Fiction is one of the hardest genres to write because the readers know what they want and editors will give it to them.
Step 1 - Read Science Fiction
Movies don't count. Written Science fiction is quite different from what Hollywood calls Science Fiction.
You have to know what Editors are buying so you have to read the best selling magazines like Analog, Asimov's and Fantasy & Science Fiction.
You need to read the ezines to find out what they like to buy.
Before you submit to a magazine make sure that you read a few of their publications to get a feel for what the editors like to publish.
You also have to read the Science Fiction classics and that means everything from the Golden age of Astounding Magazine from the 1940s right up to the present.
Step 2 - Read Science
You need to read the latest science news. You don't need a degree in hard science (although it helps), but you need to be up on the latest ideas, trends and controversies in science. This is where you will get you Science Fiction ideas. The science in Science Fiction is like an extra character. Science Fiction editors always complain that they need stories firmly rooted in science. Your science needs to be believable, even if it is not exactly factual science. You do this by making sure that whatever you write about has a one foot firmly in current science and the other foot in speculation. Step 3 - Write something every day
Step 4 - Create believable characters
The days when a Science Fiction hero was a young white male with a square jaw and good heart are long gone. Editors want real world characters. If you characters are all hip young people, it is probable that no one will want to read your story. Real characters have problems and recognizable personalities. You character is better if it is not a stylized or abstracted idea of what a character should be. A real character might be a 70 year old woman with arthritis or an unemployed electrician or an 11 year old girl with a weight problem. I have heard of editors who reject any story where the protagonist has generic character attributes like "dirty blond" hair. Step 5 - Give characters a problem to solve
Step 6 - Let your character grow
A story is the history of a journey through life.
A character, for better or worse, must be altered in some way by the experiences in the story. One way to do this is by creating an internal conflict in the character. This might be a secret fear or an obsession or a hidden guilt. Resolving this internal conflict and having your character change because of it will help make your story satisfying to the reader.
Step 7 - Start a story at a high point of action
A story should start fast and bring a reader into the plot. A story that starts with a long explanation of the current bad economic situation on Orion-gamma III will fail, but a story that starts with a man's pocket being picked by a starving beggar on a strange planet might get off the ground quicker. There are, of course, events and situations that lead up to the story, but the actual first sentence of a story should start at where stuff gets interesting.You write a good story by chopping out all the boring parts.
A good story starts with the first bit of important action and should follow that with more action, only occasionally filling in important details.
Step 8 - Before you start to write make notes
Step 9 - Create a sense of wonder
The difference between Science Fiction and a bestselling techno-suspense-thriller is that Science Fiction has a sense of wonder. This is the hardest part of writing Science Fiction and the part that I really miss when it's not there. You say "Gee-Wiz" when you read real Science Fiction. Science Fiction is much more than writing about science.Science fiction must fill you with the idea that the science will change your life. It must amaze, astound and thrill the reader.
Without this sense of wonder, your story is not Science Fiction - it is just another story that includes some science in the plot.
Step 10 - Write the good bits first
Write a good part from the middle of the story and then write the ending. Then write about another important plot point and then another.
Write the vivid and intense parts of the story.
When you are done paste these together and write some bridges to connect them. You will find that by writing only the good bits, you never really need to write the boring parts.
Step 11 - Proofread the story
Set the finished story aside for a week or two. It is easy to think that your story is the greatest literature ever written. I have often fallen into the trap of sending a story out without even proofreading it, because it was just so darn good. Give yourself a chance to forget about the details of a story before you proofread it.It is never a good idea to completely rewrite a story, but all stories need to be proofread. It is easier to fix a badly written story than it is to write a perfect story the first time. Wait until you can view your story with a more critical eye. Typos are hard to spot. If they were easy to spot, you would have fixed them the first time through.
It helps to read a story aloud and see how it flows. If the sentences are awkward or ambiguous, you can hear it better if you speak them out loud. In addition to relying on a spell checker and grammar checker to spot problems, you need a Sense Checker. Microsoft doesn't make one, so you have to hear yourself reading the story to see if the words make any sense.
Delete all adverbs immediately.
Chop long compound sentences into short simpler sentences.
Step 12 - Prepare the story for submission
Step 13 - Decide where to submit your story
Make a list of likely places to send your story. You might get lucky and sell to the first magazine on the list, but it usually takes a while before you find an editor who thinks about the story in the same way you do. I order mine by speediest first. There are many sites on the internet that record the average response times for magazines. I am impatient so I will take speed over high payment every time. I won't submit to a venue that makes me wait six months for a response.Good places to find magazines that want your story are Ralan.com and Duotrope.com.
Step 14 - SUBMIT!
Step 15 - Keep good records
Make a spreadsheet (I use Google documents) and record the date that you submit each story. Record the date a story is rejected or accepted and if accepted record how much you received. One reason records are good is that you never send an editor a story twice - they hate that. You also always know if a story is out so that you don't wind up annoying an editor by sending out a story that is in the process of being accepted somewhere else. My spreadsheet is quite complicated and I keep track of the number of words in each story and the average response times for each venue and the acceptance rate at each venue. If you know how to program spreadsheets this is quite simple. Step 16 - Resubmit
I have been told that there is a secret society of editors and they meet from time to time and read the badly written stories out loud and make jokes about them. I am sure my stories have been the subjects of these jokes, but I have still managed to sell about 40 stories in the last few years.
Step 17 - Don't give up
There's a seat for every ass, as the used car salesmen say. Your story will find a home. I don't believe in putting stories in a metaphorical trunk. I keep hitting new markets until they sell. Sometimes a marginal story winds up at one of the "for the love of" websites, but every story I write gets published eventually. I have a story that has been rejected about 25 times. I like the story and from time to time I find a market that hasn't seen it. I haven't given up on it and eventually it will find a home. How to Write Science Fiction on Amazon
World Building (Science Fiction Writing)
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Science-fiction handbook;: The writing of imaginative fiction (Professional writers library)
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