How to Write Copy for Squidoo in Five Easy Steps
I'm looking at the screen right now and wondering how I'm going to start this lens. It's a pretty big topic, but I like a challenge. In this lens I will attempt to show you how to properly write and optimize your site for search engines. Everything from writing the title to choosing the right keywords will be covered within this lens.
Why am I doing this?
Writing is my job, and besides the fact that I love it, I also do a lot of lens critiquing at SquidU. One of the biggest mistakes I see is poorly written copy. I also see questions about keyword optimization in the Chat Forum, and I know I can be of some help. With this in mind, I decided to write this lens.
I hope you find this lens useful. I will also try to keep it updated, so please return often. If I miss an area that you think I could help with, please leave a suggestion in the guestbook and I'll answer as soon as I'm able.
Alright, let's get started!
Choose the Section You Want to Read
- How to Write a Compelling Title
- How to Write a Great Introduction to your Lens
- Writing the Meat of your Lens
- Squidoo Writing Poll
- 15 Squidoo Writing Tips
- Choosing your Keywords
- Annoying Aspects of a Lens
- How Much is Enough?
- It's not a Race!
- Affiliate Writing Tips for Squidoo
- Affiliate Writing Success
- Best of Luck
- For a Complete Categorized Listing of my Lenses Visit This Lens
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How to Write a Compelling Title
Many people make the mistake of thinking web article titles are the same as newspaper article titles. They're not. When you pick up a newspaper or magazine, you're a captive audience. You've already chosen to read the publication, where as with web copy, this isn't the case. Newspapers and other forms of print media don't have to compete with search engines either.In other words, your title is the most important aspect of your article when it comes to being found by the search engines and viewers alike.
This doesn't mean the body of your article can be garbage, but it does mean that you have to have a compelling title that is keyword optimized if you want to be found on the web. Your title is basically the portal through which web surfers will find the article.
When creating a title, here's a few things to consider along the way.
Article Title Relevancy
Your title should be relevant. It should convey exactly what your article is about without having to read the entire article. Many people make the mistake of using irony to craft a title. You have to remember that when a person types in a set of keywords into a search engine, a lot of times they are greeted by article titles that are completely out of context. Ultimately, you want the reader to be able to browse the titles available and know what they'll be getting based on your article title alone.
Short and to the Point
Your article title should be between 3-10 words. In fact, 3-6 words are ideal. You also want to have your keywords as close to the beginning of the title as possible. Search engines rarely give relevance to large swaths of text. They scan the first few words and use those keywords to index your site. That's why a short title is far better than a long one.
Will People Find Your Article?
When you're crafting your title, think about what people will type into a search in order to find the info they need. In other words, pretend you're a reader and you need the information that you intend to provide. What would you type into the search engine?
Type the Title into Google
Once you think you've come up with a winner of a title, type it into Google and see what comes up. If the search yields good results, you're on the right track. If your search yields sites that have little or no bearing on the site you plan on making, you should seriously rethink your strategy.
Also, take a look at the titles displayed and see if any are the same as yours. If there is one that's the same, try playing with your title a bit to make it unique. You want your title to stand out, and it has a better chance of doing that if it's original.
Is Your Title Interesting?
Sometimes it's okay to have an uninteresting title that conveys your message accurately. However, in most cases, it helps a great deal to have a title that is interesting. It increases your chances that someone will choose your site out of the thousands of other sites displayed in the search results. It also means they'll probably start reading your article or Squidoo lens, giving you the time to hook them with your great content.
As you can see, there is a lot to think about when it comes to creating a great title. It's one of the most important aspects of your lens or article, and it needs to be chosen with care.
How to Write a Great Introduction to your Lens
Besides the title, your introduction module is the most important piece of your lens. If you've managed to snag a viewer with your title, the very first thing they'll read is your introduction module. If your introduction module is full of typos and incomprehensible English, your new visitor is going to run to the 'back' button.Your introduction module should be free of typos, and it should be interesting. After all, this is the chance you've been waiting for! You've grabbed someone's attention with your title, and now's the time to show them why they should read the rest of your content.
Your lens introduction module should be relatively short and to the point. It should adequately convey what your lens is about, and what they will stand to learn within the Squidoo lens itself.
You also want to convey a sense of personality to your lens. I don't mean that every lens should contain a full-out biography. What I mean is that the lens should inform the reader why you are an authority on the subject you're writing about.
For example, if you're writing a book review, you should tell the reader straight away that you've read the book. I see a lot of lenses that promote affiliate products, such as eBooks, that don't bother to tell the reader that the person who has written the lens has actually read the book. When this happens, it makes the lens stand out as an affiliate motivated lens, which many readers will not bother to read, no matter how good the content is.
Your introduction module should contain your keywords or keyword phrases, but it shouldn't be stuffed with them. You should try to include your keyword or keyword phrase at the beginning of the module, and use it throughout in places that it fits in seamlessly. In other words, your reader should not be able to pick out your keywords effortlessly.
Last but certainly not least, your introduction module should be long enough to satisfy, without giving away everything. This module is basically your teaser. It's the opening phase of your campaign to keep the reader interested. If the reader learns everything they need, you can wave bye-bye, because they're leaving now. If you don't give them enough information to keep reading, then they'll leave and find a site that fulfills their needs quicker.
The introduction to this lens is 209 words long. I would recommend having it no longer than 250 words and no shorter than 150 words.
Writing the Meat of your Lens
You've made it to the meat of your Squidoo lens. You can now breathe a sigh of relief. The meat of your lens is easier to write than you may think. Once the title and introduction are finished, the heavy lifting is over.Or is it?
When writing your modules you should try to write them using the law of brevity. Long rambling modules are not going to keep your visitors interested. You want to get your point across, make it interesting enough to hold their attention, yet say it in as few words as possible.
You've already told the reader what you're going to tell them in your introduction, and now it's time to tell them. Make sure the titles of your text modules are relevant, just like your main title. Each text module title should tell the reader what they're in store for, and allow them to choose whether they want to read it or not.
When writing for the web, whether it's an article or a Squidoo lens, you want your writing to come out natural. Pretend you're writing an email to a dear friend. Use contractions whenever possible, such as 'it's' instead of 'it is'. Contractions make your writing friendlier and easier to read. When you don't use them, it makes your writing look dry and boring.
You should be writing text module content with your chosen keywords in mind. Again, you don't want to use them too much, because not only can search engines ban your Squid page for using keyword stuffing, but also because your readers will become annoyed and leave. Obviously, you want to avoid both of these things.
A good rule of thumb is to place your keywords within your text at a 1%-3% ratio. That means for every 100 words, your keywords should show up 1-3 times. This rule will apply to each keyword or keyword phrase you use in your lens.
I break this rule all the time. However, I don't care. I do follow this rule when I write web copy for my clients though. I rarely do when constructing a Squidoo lens for myself because I'm creating the lens for me. Sure, I want visitors to read what I've written, but I don't want to 'work' at it. I have used this rule for a two book reviews and it works. They both receive more search engine traffic than any of my other lenses.
Typo's and bad grammar are a huge issue. You want the content of your Squidoo lens to be legible. If your lens contains excessive grammar and spelling errors, you lose credibility with your reader, which is never a good thing.
Squidoo Writing Poll
15 Squidoo Writing Tips
- Read your copy out loud once you're finished. You can often find spelling and grammar issues when reading aloud that you won't find reading in your head.
- Have someone proofread your material before you publish. Two sets of eyes are better than one!
- Make sure each module has paragraph breaks. I see this all the time. If you're using Word to type up your content, make sure you double space it. That way when you paste it into your lens, it will include paragraph breaks.
- Whether you're writing in a module or using a list module like this one, bulleted or numbered lists are good things. Web browsers are impatient and fickle, making these lists a good choice.
- Proofread your work again.
- Are you sure your copy is as error-free as possible? Maybe you should proofread it again.
- When you're proofreading, cut out any sentences that seem awkward or are unneeded. Remember, you want to convey your message without rambling.
- Remember to use contractions whenever possible, unless you want a dry sounding lens. For example, if you're creating a medical lens, you may in fact want your content to sound dry.
- Like bulleted or numbered lists, subtitles are a good choice. They allow readers to browse your content before they read. You can also use each module to make your point quickly, much like you would if you had subtitles.
- Put the most important and interesting information first.
- When crafting the opening of your module, it's a good choice to hit the reader with a statistic or fact that 'wows' them. This will keep them reading. For instance, if you were creating a Squidoo lens on breast cancer, you might want to open with, "Twenty percent of all women will suffer from some form of cancer in their lives." No, this isn't a real statistic, and yours should be, but it shows you how a shocking statistic or fact can draw your reader in.
- Never plagiarize. Even if you use content that is open to the public, you lose search engine ranking because it's not original copy. Write everything in your own words. And changing a few words of someone else's copy is still plagiarism.
- Before you begin writing, figure out your target audience. If you're writing content that is targeting an audience of 12-18 year olds, you'll want your content to sound loose and relaxed. If you're typing up a lens that is supposed to be targeting seniors with a particular health problem, you'll probably want to write it more formally.
- Commas aren't as big an issue with web copy as it is with print copy. However, they can be used too much or too little. When reading your copy aloud in the proofreading stage, place a comma wherever you naturally pause in the sentence.
- Write about what you know. If you want your lens to sound authoritative and interesting, it's always best to write on a subject you know something about. If you're promoting an affiliate product, for instance, make sure you've actually used the product and know something about it.
Choosing your Keywords
Choosing the right keywords and keyword phrases when writing your lens is important if you want your page to be found outside of Squidoo. It's also not an exact science.There are several ways to come up with keywords. The least scientific way is to come up with a list of keywords that you think visitors would type into a search engine to find the information you intend to provide. Once you have the list, visit Google or Yahoo and type the keywords in and see what pops up. If the keyword has lots of competition, you might want to choose a different one.
You can also visit keyword tool sites, such as Google AdWords or Search It!
There are a lot of different keyword tools that you can use on the web. Ideally, you want the keywords you use to be searched for, but not to have so much competition that your Squidoo lens gets buried in obscurity.
Finding the right keywords and keyword phrases can be frustrating. In most cases, it's a hit and miss thing. Sometimes you stumble across the right phrase by accident. However, it's always a good idea to try and optimize your Squidoo page with keywords that make your site more visible.
Annoying Aspects of a Lens
When you're reading a lens, what aspect absolutely turns you off?
Fetching blurbs now... please stand byWhen the writing is bad
favored1 says:
When the lens is just put out there without proofreading it. I also do not like trying to read the lens when it is jumping about because the pictures aren't the same size in the photo gallary module.
Posted January 14, 2012
Mortgage411 says:
Bad grammar is like nails on a chalk board to me. Spelling not so much 'cause I live in a glass house in that neighborhood.
Thanks for a great primer! Just starting to get the hang of this so your piece has given me a good jumping off point to review my first real lens.
Posted July 20, 2011
littlelotus says:
bad grammar, though it's funny because English is my second language. I might make grammatical mistakes and typos here and there too myself. Sometimes it's so bad that you can't understand what they're trying to say, then it's annoying.
Posted May 27, 2011
writer_cb says:
A lack of original content annoys me. This combined with tons of ads makes me click the back button. Bad writing does it too, of course!
Posted April 30, 2011
emmalarkins says:
Good writing is a big thing for me. If you're going to produce content for other people to read, it should be really excellent
Posted February 27, 2010
Joan4 says:
An incomplete bio - or a picture of the orange guy will send me scurrying away. Poor grammar and spelling are huge turn-offs, too!
Posted February 11, 2010
KonaGirl says:
When the writer throws up 4 or 5 modules and calls it a lens; showing little or no thought to what they are writing and showing to the world.
Posted September 12, 2009
burntchestnut says:
When it's obvious the person is only writing in order to sell something. I understand wanting to sell something, but also give us some interesting facts.
Second, bad grammar and punctuation. One of two mistakes are understandable, but when an article is full of mistakes you know the writing just doesn't care.
Posted August 01, 2009
TopStyleTravel says:
Incorrect spelling, too many graphics or bright colors. Bio's without information on the lens writer.
Posted June 01, 2009
RichW1 says:
Poor structure of paragraphs, spelling so bad it appears obvious it wasn't proofread or spell checked. That's no fun :-(
Posted May 26, 2009
JanTUB says:
Gratuitous images and extra bits that aren't relevant are a turn off for me.
Posted April 29, 2009
RolandTumble says:
I can forgive less-than-perfect writing when it's obvious that the writer isn't a native English speaker.
But those of you who are don't have any excuse.
Posted April 26, 2009
Sojourn says:
Bad writing or nearly no writing at all. I feel misled if I go in to critique a lens and realize the whole thing is a bunch of ad copy or a few badly written sentences.
Posted April 26, 2009
x3xsolxdierx3x says:
Bad writing! Not to be mean, but, I come across quite a few lenses that are jammed packed with spelling/grammar errors......I'm not exactly perfect at it either, but, i guess poorly-proofread lenses are a major pet peeve of mine......
Posted April 19, 2009
Dkprincess6 says:
I don't like bad grammar. You have to be a little more lenient if the writer isn't used to speaking English, but when English is your native language, you should know your grammar.
Posted April 19, 2009
says:
When I see more Amazon/eBay modules than content.
Posted April 19, 2009
boshemia says:
When you can tell the creator has put no real effort into the lens, why bother reading it?
Posted April 19, 2009
divacratus says:
Definitely when the writing is bad. Especially when they get the spellings wrong! Not everyone can be grammar perfect, but it's really irritating when they don't bother to use a spell checker.
Posted April 19, 2009
Anything else
Becksta says:
Those lenses whose sole aim seems to be to sell something... anything... just sell. By all means, use the plexo's but keep them in line with your topic.
And give me a explanation why the latest games console is so good if you expect me to pay out that much for it!!! A load of jargon doesn't exactly cut the mustard
Posted July 29, 2011
---Chazz says:
Lenses that are simply a compilation of products to buy. Nothing really original and certainly nothing to be learned. Bad writing only bothers me if the writer is a native English speaker. I am far more tolerant of those who write in a second, third, or even more language.
Posted July 12, 2011
marciag says:
A content that starts right off the bat with a big Amazon or other affiliate link before anything else. For me, this is when I hit the Back button because I know that the lense's purpose is only to sell, and not to (sell and) inform.
Posted May 11, 2011
Othercat says:
Lack of personal content. I don't like reading a lens that's full of information that I can get at another website. I'd rather read your personal opinions and your personal stories. That's what makes a lens unique.
Posted April 03, 2011
vikksimmons says:
The lack of the person on the page. Whether you're selling me info or product, I want the writing to reflect a sense of the person who is putting this thing together. So I don't like a lens with a generic intro and then a bunch of sales modules that pull the text from the supplier. I want to sense your passion, interest or rationale for doing the lens. Why is it worth my time?
Posted April 02, 2011
NarrowPathPublishing says:
I can't stand lenses that read like spam. The writing/grammar is bad and the whole lens is nothing but sales modules.
Posted November 13, 2010
Brad says:
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Posted August 05, 2010
RebeccaE says:
if they don't seem to try to improve their work. Writing can be fixed up, everything else as well, but fixing up writing is easy
Posted May 28, 2010
BigGirlBlue says:
When I see three (or more) banner ads lined up one after the other I'm totally turned off. Placing the odd banner ad on a lens is acceptable but creating a strip looks awful and is totally unproductive. One well placed banner is better than a bunch of popped in ones.
I also hate it when no attention is paid to the bio. A simple line will do.
Posted February 19, 2010
KimGiancaterino says:
Cookie cutter, crassly commercial lenses are a turn-off. Ditto 5 versions of the same lens with keywords stuffed all over the place. A reader doesn't need to be hit over the head!
Posted February 13, 2010
MerryM says:
Overly promotional lenses make me hit the back button faster than anything else. There's a big difference between recommending useful or relevant products, and throwing in a bunch of amazon modules on the off chance that someone might buy something.
Posted February 11, 2010
Ramonailona says:
I'm new at all of this. But I am realy trying. I am not a good writer at all. I don't have many words. Not good at the English Writing. I have a hard time putting my ideas together. My Lenses aren't very good. But with working at it I believe i eventually will get better. I do like your Lens. I want to learn. I'm one of those that didn't know what SPAM was, or Twitter etc. I have to say I did a few Lenses that were Spammy with out knowing it. And didn't mean to. But I have always heard of people working on the Computer from home and they were making money. I want to do that to. I would find things that I liked and realy want to share it with other people. I just don't know how to put it in writing. But.... I'm getting a little bit better. I found something that I enjoy and it consists of working from home and using the computer. I am finally making a little money. It's only a few hundred dollars a month right now. But that's OK. I wish everyone Great Success in what ever you are trying to succeed in. I almost forget to answer the question: What turns me off is when you search for something and you get all those POP up's of something you didn't search for!
Posted December 26, 2009
BarbRad says:
It's hard to choose between these, since both bad writing and overly promotional lenses turn me off. Perhaps predictability is what turns me off the most. Some short and sweet lenses are obviously written just to sell and, seemingly, almost by a formula. Key words, in title, brief introduction using keywords without much uniqueness. Then a selling module, another text module (maybe), automatically generated content from twitter or google or somewhere else, another selling module, maybe a poll, and a guest book. Many of these keep to the four-module requirement to be "finished" and have only about one module -- the introduction -- with anything original.
Some are longer than four modules, but every other module is trying to sell something. I read one module and then comes "the commercial" before the next module. I tend to skip the commercials unless they are very artfully done, and some lensmasters are really good at weaving them in so they actually integrate with the content. I'm trying to learn from these good lensmasters.
Posted September 18, 2009
KathyMcGraw says:
Too many selling modules without text...I prefer reading something about the product, person, experience.
Posted July 29, 2009
Macafarian says:
I aggree completely with Suzie, I hate when people jam their lenses full of ClickBank eBooks.
Posted June 15, 2009
How Much is Enough?
I've run across this problem a few times in the last few days, which has prompted me to update this lens.If you're creating a lens or writing an article in general, you should always assume the reader knows nothing.
For example, this lens tells you how to write a lens from top to bottom. Instead of assuming that someone knows how to write a great title, I explain how to do it, and why it's important. It's tough thinking like this sometimes, because we usually take for granted that other people know what we're talking about, which is rarely the case. It's always better to have more information than not enough.
How can you ensure this happens?
Here are a few pointers that I used when I first started writing.
Planning to Write your Squidoo Lens
Before writing a single word into a Squidoo module, map out a plan of action. Think of each Squidoo module as a separate article. Each module will contain a theme or some bits of information that will be useful to the reader.
Now write down or brainstorm ideas for your lens. You could even come up with the titles and use bullets to briefly put down ideas under each header.
This should help you map out a strategy that will ensure you have a Squidoo lens that's jam-packed full of useful information.
How do I Know What to Write Down?
Try to think as if you're a consumer or someone who wants information on your particular subject. You don't know anything about your subject, but you're interested. What are the questions you'd be looking to have answered?
Once you figure that out, your brainstorming will come very easily. The trick is to think up as many ideas as possible, even if you don't use them all.
How Much Should I Write?
As much as you need to get your point across. Rushing doesn't produce great lenses. Taking your time and getting it right does. If it takes you two text modules to make your point, then that's how many you should write.
However, in most cases it will take much longer. I write constantly, and I can type extremely fast. I also have experience when it comes to writing articles, which helps me a great deal when it comes to crafting Squidoo lenses.
Sometimes it still takes me hours just to write the content for a lens! In fact, my best fiction books ever lens took me about four solid hours to write. It was worth it though. I'm pleased with the end result, and I have a lens I can be proud of, no matter if it gets a high rating or not. I've even had the honour of having it blessed a few times.

It's not a Race!
Affiliate Writing Tips for Squidoo
Affiliate writing is much like any other type of web writing. In fact, the same formula can be applied to both.Besides the fact that you're trying to sell something, nothing else really needs to be changed. The biggest problem with most of the poorly-written affiliate lenses I've found on Squidoo is that they don't pose a problem and offer a solution.
People who browse the web are either looking to be entertained or they're looking to have a problem solved. It's really that simple. Your affiliate lens should reflect that fact. When you rant and rave about how wonderful a product is, but neglect to solve the readers problem or offer any really useful information, the reader feels ripped off and you end up looking like a greasy used car salesman.
Instead, ask yourself why someone would want the product. Tell the reader how the product affected your life for the better, propose a problem and then explain how this particular product will help solve that problem.
For example, if you're selling a book on gardening, explain to the reader that a lush garden will boost their property value. Tell them that the garden will look great and have their neighbours wishing they'd bought the book. Explain how you used the book to plant a garden that is the envy of your entire block.
In other words, show them the problem (you had an ugly lawn and weeds for a garden) and show them the answer (you bought the book and became a whiz at gardening) and you've accomplished your goal.
You also want to explain exactly what they'll receive if they were to buy the product. Is it just an eBook? Do they get access to a gardening forum? Are there audio tapes or MP3 files to go along with the eBook?
When writing affiliate lenses, you want to think like a consumer. Ask yourself what you look for when shopping for a product, and then provide that to the reader. Stay away from ad loaded, spam filled lenses, and give the reader value for their time. When you do this, you add to the likelihood that they'll buy the product you're trying to sell.
And one last thing - if you're going to try to sell a product, you should always believe in what you're attempting to sell. Most of the time, a reader will know when you're trying to yank their chain using false hype. Try the product, and become an affiliate if you actually believe that it will help people. Believe me, if you believe in the product you're trying to market, it will show up in your writing.
Affiliate Writing Success

Best of Luck
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CarlittoDunaway
Feb 1, 2012 @ 5:16 am | delete
- Useful tips! Thank you!
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lyndamakaracreations
Jan 25, 2012 @ 4:30 pm | delete
- Very informative! Thank you for sharing this.
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collettehrock
Jan 25, 2012 @ 7:50 am | delete
- I understand what you mean about hurrying the lenses, much better to take your time and research. This was really worth reading good on the writers on Squid Log
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poutine
Jan 24, 2012 @ 9:46 am | delete
- Excellent advice. It's fun and rewarding to write on Squidoo.
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OhMe
Jan 24, 2012 @ 9:36 am | delete
- I read about you on Bev's Showcase so came right on over here. I am going to share this page with a friend of mine who has recently joined Squidoo.
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favored1
Jan 14, 2012 @ 1:25 am | delete
- Helpful lens. It helps us to be mindful of what we need to focus on before pushing publish. Thanks. Adding it to my Help Me lens.
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EMangl
Sep 17, 2011 @ 10:00 am | delete
- too bad that my english is not good enough to express things half as good as you did, my lenses lack mainly on text
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franstan Sep 10, 2011 @ 10:40 pm | delete
- I found this lens very helpful. Thank you
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RamblingRosy
Jul 12, 2011 @ 11:44 am | delete
- Titles are my nemesis:), but aside from that I found your affiliate tips very helpful - just the input and perspective I needed.
Thanks, Mike!
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DecoratingforEvents
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- Thank you for sharing your expertise in writing! The tips are fantastic!
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