A Ghost Girl Named Marissa

An Uncanny Voice is Heard

Kids are creative. With a Flip camera and lots of imagination, my daughters M and E made a video titled Horror House. It was over 3 years ago and they were quite young at the time, just 9 and 10 years old. What is spooky about the video is that no special effects were used to make the ghoulish voice you hear. E then wrote all of the dialogue to the story and we published it on our website for all to enjoy. The video is a bit long, so fast forward to 1:21 to hear what I mean. After watching the vid, you may want to check out the story.

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Horror House Video

An earthbound spirit is pursued by a demon.

No special effects were used in this video. The effects occurred accidentally upon editing.
The ghostly face in the beginning of the video is taken from the cover of the book Haunted Alaska, that was described in our camping trip story, Camping, Boating, and Bears.
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Horror House

The Story

Part I

Katy hears scary footsteps are heard stomping around the cabin.

A girl, Katy, sat in her cabin one night. She heard the stomping of large footsteps going around her cabin.

"What's happening?" whispered Katy, in a frightened voice.

She could hear heavy breathing, as if it was some kind of creature, a monster.

Katy kept whispering, "What's happening?" in a small voice.

The monster roared, and shook the cabin. Katy screamed, terrified. The monster stomped away.

Part II

Katy meets the ghost.

The next day, Katy was sitting under an apple tree.

"What happened last night?" Katy asked herself.

Suddenly, Katy saw a girl, walking toward her. "Hello" said the girl, in a wispy voice.

"Who are you?" asked Katy, surprised.

"I'm a ghost," answered the girl.

"No," stammered Katy.

"I died, I just died," said the girl.

"It can't be true!" shouted Katy.

The ghost started acting strange.

"What is it?" Katy asked.

"He's chasing me!" screamed the ghost girl, shrilly. She clutched her head.

"Who? Who? What? Who?" asked Katy, scared.

The girl kept screaming. The girl went into shock.

“You better!" said the ghost girl, looking up. "He wants to kill me!”

"What's wrong, what's wrong?" Katy asked.

"He's gonna get meeee!" screeched the ghost.

"I'll protect you from him," said Katy.

"You better!" said the ghost girl, looking up. "He wants to kill me! He never did! Before I died he didn't kill me! I was run over!"

"Stand up," said Katy. "Stand up."

The ghost girl screamed. "I'm afraid! I was run over before he got me!"

"He's gonna see meee!"

The ghost yelled, "No!" and fell to the ground.

"Get up," Katy said.

The ghost girl sat up. "Is he gone?" she asked.

"Yes, he's gone," said Katy.

The ghost girl took Katy's hand, and looked quickly to the sides. As the girl got up, Katy asked, "Tell me, are you really dead?"

"I'm dead," said the girl, as she walked along. "I'm deader than dead."

"Tell me everything," said Katy. "Tell me."

Part III

A monster tries to possess the ghost.

"He wanted to kill me. This very road!" The ghost pointed to an old road.

"That road?" Katy asked.

"That! Was my house!" screeched the ghost, pointing to a house. "He was chasing me, I can feel his very presence, right here!" The ghost stood still, and then resumed talking. "I ran out into the road, and that car, just like that!" the ghost said, pointing to a car down the road. "Hit me," the ghost cried out. "And I was killed, right before he came. And, I think he still wants me!!!!"

Suddenly, the ghost was grabbed by an invisible force, and was being pulled away from Katy. The ghost girl reached out to Katy.

"He's taking me over!" screamed the ghost girl. "Don't let him take me! Don't, don't, don't!"

"Get away!" shouted Katy to the monster.

The ghost fell down. Her breathing was hard. She grabbed Katy's dress. "He didn't get me this time, but maybe he will next time."

"I'll try to help you, I'll try," Katy whispered.

After a little while, Katy left the ghost alone. She saw a monster, walking toward her. "I want her, you know where she is," cackled the monster in a disgusting voice.

Part IV

Katy resists the monster and the ghost passes over.

"I won't give her to you!" shouted Katy.

"Yes, you will!" replied the monster.

Katy held a magic stick above her head. It would kill the evil monster.

"No, don't, de don't!" screamed the monster.

The monster sank to the ground. Now that the ghost girl's unfinished business on earth was solved, she had to cross over into the light.

"This is my name," said the ghost. "My name, is Marissa."

"And mine, Katy," said Katy.

They exchanged good-byes. Katy waved her hand at the parting Marissa. "Hey Uncle Joe! Hey Uncle Joe!" yelled Marissa. She had seen her deceased uncle, waiting for her in the light. Suddenly, Marissa disappeared.

The End of the Story

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  • RMKK Aug 31, 2011 @ 5:43 pm | delete
    Thank you! This vid was a few years back and my girls are now in their teens! Wow, they grow up fast, as they say. Thanks for the comment. :)
    ~Marlene
  • KonaGirl Aug 31, 2011 @ 10:27 am | delete
    Your daughters are so cute and they are just so fun at that age aren't they? Nice tips on video recording.
  • catbehaviors Apr 5, 2011 @ 4:48 pm | delete
    Great new tips! Thank you! xD
  • lovelylashes Mar 29, 2011 @ 11:27 am | delete
    Lol at the beginning. Funny but eerie movie. :)
  • jvsper63 Mar 3, 2011 @ 10:08 am | delete
    Really cute girls..Love this lens:)
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Spark your child's imagination with the FLIP UltraHD Video Camera. You and your child will have hours of fun with this easy to use video camera. The Flip Camera comes with some really cool software to enhance even the simplest of videos. And it is a cinch to upload to Youtube. A FLIP Video Camera was a gift to my child and I cannot emphasize enough how much she has enjoyed it. She learned a lot about videography too! FLIP Video Cameras are an excellent choice to bring out the creative videographer in you, your child, or grandchild. Makes a great gift for any occasion.