How To Edit Your Novel
Today's publishing industry is cut-throat and difficult to break into. To compete, your writing needs to sparkle. A good editing plan can make the difference between 'sold' and 'shelved'.
The best way to edit your novel is to think of it as a pyramid. The foundation consists of your basic storyline. The next layer consists of the scenes you've used to tell the story. The top layer consists of the sentences you chose to bring the scene to life.
To create a strong novel you need to work from the bottom up. First you evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of your story, next you consider the scenes. Only after you have revised your story and scene choices should you fiddle with individual sentences and paragraphs. Using this method you avoid working on a specific section only to decide that the whole scene needs to be deleted!
Step 1: Edit For Story
· Does your main character have a goal that drives him/her through the story?
· Is the external barrier that prevents the main character from reaching his/her goal substantial enough to carry the book?
· Is the book set in the correct physical location? The right time period? At the right time of year?
Step 2: Edit For Scene
· Does the point-of-view character have an objective during this scene that is relevant to their story goal?
· Is there a good mix of narrative, dialogue, and introspection?
· Can the reader feel the emotions of the characters? Are the emotions believable?
Step 3: Edit Sentences
· Do you vary your sentence length and avoid prolonged sections with sentences of the same length?
· Do you avoid repetition of the same word or phrase?
· Do you minimize adverbs and other weak words like 'was/were', 'have, had', 'feel'/felt', etc?
Once you've completed the third pass through your manuscript, you can be confident you've considered all of the important elements. Your novel is ready to submit!
Good luck with your novel....
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