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From the lens ESL Lessons: Story Writing for Elementary Students.

I don't pretend to be any sort of expert on ESL Story Writing, but this system has worked quite well in my lessons in the past. I hope it can help others to induce their students to write something intelligible. There are probably a lot of holes in this little piece of advice, so I'm very happy to receive your comments in the place provided here.

  • franstan Aug 13, 2011 @ 7:02 pm | delete
    Blessed by a visiting Squid Angel
  • nickupton Sep 26, 2011 @ 4:12 am | delete
    Thank you
  • Kirilov Jul 30, 2011 @ 2:27 pm | delete
    A great lens on learning English as a second language. Those who are not native English speakers can also take advantage of free translation tools for Firefox and other major browsers that provide instant translation free of charge. Thanks.
  • Trireme Jun 26, 2011 @ 6:15 am | delete
    Fun activity with lots of scope for students to improve their writing skills. Great lens nick one i will find useful in the future ;]
  • jonduckett Jun 10, 2011 @ 10:44 am | delete
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  • nickupton Sep 26, 2011 @ 4:21 am | delete
    Thanks I added it.
  • Tolovaj May 15, 2011 @ 7:19 am | delete
    Thanks for this tips, I was looking just for something like that. Special thanks for resources of pictures.
  • richtowns Apr 13, 2011 @ 2:45 am | delete
    Great lense Ill be following this advise as Im a new teacher. One question, The cartoon strip with the child in pajamas flouting in a bed, where is that from? Ive been trying to find a story I remember from my childhood where a boy floats around in space drinking milk from bottles and havent had any luck finding it and this looks similar!
  • dchittur Mar 1, 2011 @ 9:10 pm | delete
    This is a beautiful lens full of great ideas. My students like storywriting as a class. I just built my own lens if you want to check it out...http://www.squidoo.com/can-do-wida
  • masz09 Jan 10, 2011 @ 11:13 am | delete
    Thank you for sharing. I can apply it to my class
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  • WriterBuzz Oct 5, 2010 @ 10:39 pm | delete
    Your lens is great. Very informative. I liked your lens with a thumbs up.
  • GonnaFly Oct 31, 2009 @ 1:57 pm | delete
    Another excellent lens! Even for EFL (is that a "word") this is a useful idea.
  • nickupton Oct 23, 2009 @ 12:10 am | delete
    Yes, basically this allows the teacher to keep things under their control and lead the students in the right direction.[in reply to spirituality]
  • spirituality Oct 21, 2009 @ 2:40 am | delete
    Great idea - also makes sure the kids are not inventing stories they don't have the words for yet (or too many new words). And by selecting the series of pictures well, you can go around making sure they learn words from all kinds of social and physical situations.

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nickupton

From 1997 to 2004 I taught English as a Second Language in Thailand to students aged 4 to 70, although I spent most of my time teaching 6-9 year olds.... more »

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