Haiku as Teacher
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How to Learn Life's Most Important Lessons
Do not seek after the sages of the past.
Seek what they sought.
What is it they sought? Perhaps it was enlightenment, a greater appreciation for life's gifts, or a deeper self-awareness.
As a perpetual seeker, I have found haiku to be an extraordinary teacher. You may be wondering what you can learn and how to go about gleaning insights from this poetic way of experiencing the world and your place in it. I invite you to begin finding your very own answers by walking alongside me for a few moments. I look forward to the lessons of the day.
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Are you a perpetual learner?
When the student is ready, the teacher will appear. ~Zen Proverb
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Stepping Stones Along the Haiku Way
Six Steps to Insightful Living and Learning
#1.Immerse yourself in nature.
#2.Be still.
#3.Pay attention to one thing.
#4.Express your mind's eye picture.
#5.Pause. Absorb the lesson.
#6.Stay connected. Share with others.
Nature Immersion
Haiku is dependent on your commitment to nature immersion. The more quality time you set aside for truly experiencing the natural world, the greater your capacity for engaging in powerful haiku moments.
On Stillness
To learn from haiku, one must not only slow down significantly, but also gain a capacity for great stillness. It is during those moments of deep meditation that we are able to focus on the feelings that are stirred by the object of our attention.
Instructions for Living a Life
Instructions for living a life: Pay attention. Be astonished. Tell about it.
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How to Pay Attention
spiraling once, twice,
again —
a raven's wind dance."
Haiku is all about paying deep attention. Its essence is full immersion in the moment. In a world filled with distractions, how does one learn to be more fully in the now? Where does one start?
First, find one thing on which to concentrate for a few moments. Depending on the day, it might be the weather, the sky, an animal, the full moon, something that is blooming, or anything that captures your imagination.
Yesterday, because of the wind conditions, it was the ravens that caught my attention over and over again. The wind currents and thermals were enabling some amazing artistry in the sky above me.
Are you still with me?
The Haiku Moment
red feathers strewn everywhere —
my heart grows quiet."
Just as haiku is about rapt attention, you gain ever increasing awareness through your expression of unique haiku moments.
What is a haiku moment? Margaret McGee eloquently describes this as "a moment when the mind stops and the heart moves." And so, the best haiku capture the heart of a moment.
One of my most powerful experiences of a haiku moment occurred early one morning when I was taking a stroll down the nature trail behind my country home. Suddenly, I came upon dozens of feathers scattered at my feet. It was obvious that a bird's life had ended there. I felt incredible sadness at this loss of life. Out of that reverent moment a haiku was born.
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Have you known a haiku moment?
A Single Image
falls from the trees
in droplets —
cheer,
cheer,
cheer,
cheer,
cheer."
You might think of haiku as a snapshot. It begins as a picture in your mind's eye. A well-crafted haiku is meant to depict a single image. Of course, this can be a multi-sensory experience.
One morning, after a rain shower, I lay in bed listening to drops of water falling from the trees and landing softly on the ground. The rhythmic percussion of those rain drops was joined by the distinct song of a cardinal outside my bedroom window.
In my mind's eye, I could see the cardinal's voice dripping from the trees just as those drops of water were slipping down off the leaves.
Tapping Into Astonishment
The Power of One
Astonishment is born of attentiveness. By focusing deeply on one thing during one moment, a space within is created for astonishment.

When we try to pick out anything by itself we find that it is bound fast
by a thousand invisible cords that cannot be broken,
to everything in the universe.
~John Muir
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Telling About It
We write to taste life twice... ~Anais Nin
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If the one who writes experiences life twice, then those who share haiku moments experience life perpetually.
One of the great bonuses of experiencing astonishment is that it creates a deeper awareness of the connectedness of all things. Haiku is really about those intimate moments of interconnectedness. It is natural, then, to want to reach out in a spirit of community to forge connections with others who seek the lessons that may be found in nature.
In expressing the beauty or wonder that was known in a haiku moment, one offers it up to others. And, in the sharing, we are able to obtain new insights and begin a new cycle of learning.
Lessons Learned
As I was thinking about what I wanted to share here related to Haiku as Teacher, I reviewed poems that I had written over the past six years. One of the benefits of reading those journal entries again was to feel inspired to create more poetry and to take my poetic living to the next level. That in itself is a very good thing. Another benefit was a realization of the important lessons that I have learned from living so many incredible haiku moments. I will share just a few of those lessons here in closing.

Haiku Lessons
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Blessings
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TeamSTM
May 23, 2012 @ 11:49 am | delete
- Being at Peace, Having Calm or being Still comes easier when someone learns to Let Go and seperates themselves from the Desires of a Material Existance!
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MarionElodie
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- great lens, the whiteness of the comments box is getting fuller by every letter I type.
Awareness. Thanks.
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ajgodinho Feb 24, 2012 @ 12:04 pm | delete
- Wonderful to read through this sort of calming and relaxing lens. I was almost lost in it. I enjoy the conscious stillness and calm, and manage to get a few moments of it most days. It really makes a huge difference. Thanks for sharing your experiences through this well-crafted lens...stay blessed! :)
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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- So happy this was a calm, relaxing interlude in your day. I often find that haiku moments are an oasis. Your blessing and comments are deeply appreciated.
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Michey Feb 24, 2012 @ 11:44 am | delete
- Very important info and deep explanation of Haiku moment. You are a good teacher
Thanks
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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- I've written extensively on the topic of Self-Inquiry. Many thanks for sharing the journey.
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bbest
Jan 7, 2012 @ 10:36 pm | delete
- Thank you for sharing your experience of Haiku as teacher. I also have learned many lessons. When I reread my Haiku it brings back the moment when I first wrote it. I love the response I get from others who read my Haiku -- very rewarding.
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Placemats
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CruiseReady Oct 1, 2011 @ 3:43 am | delete
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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kimmanleyort
Sep 10, 2011 @ 7:06 am | delete
- I really enjoyed reading about your experience with haiku and what it means to you. I have been trying to explain contemplative photography lately and, I think, haiku is the writing equivalent. Wonderful and blessed.
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RenaissanceWoman2010
Sep 15, 2011 @ 10:44 am | delete
- You have offered up a very insightful observation about haiku and contemplative art. Photography is certainly my visual equivalent of haiku and poetic imaging. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and blessing. Thank you!
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- A moment ago
I breathed in separation
yet breathed out oneness.
I am deeply moved by your words and the Spirit that awakened them.
You have reached out and touched a kindred part of me.
I thank you.
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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- What a beautiful comment and poem. Thank you for this gift. Kindred spirits always connect in such powerful ways.
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ChrisDay
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- Thanks for your message about my 'wind' haiku - however, it would have been nicer if I'd spelled 'pane' properly - whoops - how did that slip through?
"Buffeted by wind
the rain lashes window pane
still wet glow of dawn"
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RenaissanceWoman2010
Sep 15, 2011 @ 10:55 am | delete
- Perhaps the minor slip was a Wabi-sabi haiku moment (Wabi-sabi being the Japanese aesthetic of a beauty imperfect, impermanent, incomplete). I happen to love Wabi-sabi and how it embraces that which does not have to be perfect to be beautiful.
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- Buffeted by wind
the rain lashes window pain
still wet glow of dawn
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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- Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I can tell you are a kindred spirit. May you continue to have many haiku moments. I encourage you to express the haiku within.
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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efriedman
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Shoes and hat and gentleness
Stay inside yourself
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May 29, 2011 @ 9:40 pm | delete
- I love your verse. Thank you!
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tandemonimom May 21, 2011 @ 8:30 pm | delete
- You share your haiku
We read and remember how
Poetry relaxes
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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RenaissanceWoman2010
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May 19, 2011 @ 1:25 pm | delete
- Great lens, I wish I could put this comment in the form of Haiku, I don't have that ability. See you around the galaxy...
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RenaissanceWoman2010
May 19, 2011 @ 1:57 pm | delete
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DaveStone13
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In touch.
Blessed.
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RenaissanceWoman2010
May 19, 2011 @ 1:06 pm | delete
- Thank you! Haiku takes on a momentum of its own. This is a very good thing. It's all about the community aspect of haiku... a very key element... the interconnections.
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ShandiGP
May 19, 2011 @ 11:45 am | delete
- Thank you for this lens. I think I'm going to restart my poetry journal.
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RenaissanceWoman2010
May 19, 2011 @ 1:04 pm | delete
- Wonderful! I do hope you return to your poetic reflections. Wishing you much joy on your journey.
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debkrenaissance May 19, 2011 @ 10:27 am | delete
- Thank you for sharing something so beautiful...
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RenaissanceWoman2010
May 19, 2011 @ 1:02 pm | delete
- You are very welcome. I am the one who has benefited the most in the sharing. I learned so much in crafting this collection of beautiful moments. Appreciate your visit and comments.
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May 19, 2011 @ 10:11 am | delete
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May 19, 2011 @ 8:42 am | delete
- Your visit and comments are appreciated. Thank you!
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Jessica_Burde May 19, 2011 @ 7:58 am | delete
- Someone, I think it was Emily Dickenson, once said that poetry is putting the most meaning into the fewest words. I've always felt that haiku is the essence of that idea.
Thank you for a great lesson.
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RenaissanceWoman2010
May 19, 2011 @ 8:41 am | delete
- Very excellent observation and contribution. It is all about finding what is essential and eliminating that which is not needed. I am working on living my life in this way - packing the most meaning into each moment. Living large, dwelling small. :-)
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