Halloween On Max Patch Mountain
A Fun Little Halloween Short Story
"Years ago," began Nancy as she maneuvered the car out of the motel parking lot towards Max Patch Mountain, "Max Patch was used as a landing strip for small aircraft. Legend has it there were once three entrepreneurial young sisters determined to make their fortune from the mineral water of Hot Springs. There was already a resort and spa in the little North Carolina town, so the girls decided to market the health benefits of mineral water as a beverage. They bottled up some samples, packed their carpetbags, and struck out for the big city.
"The girls so charmed the most influential restaurateurs that they soon had orders from all the finest establishments in New York City. Elated with this promising beginning, the three decided to return to Hot Springs in style and hired a pilot to fly them to the landing strip on top of Max Patch.
"It was a clear, but moonless night - in late October, I think it was - when the little plane skimmed over the southern Appalachians near Max Patch. The wind had risen, and the pilot struggled to maintain control as he strained his eyes through the darkness to locate the treeless summit. At last the grassy strip came into view. As the pilot banked and circled for an approach, a sudden blast of wind swept unimpeded up the side of the bald mountain, rolling the plane sideways. The pilot tried valiantly to level the plane, but it was no use. The plane dropped suddenly, stubbing a wing tip on the ground, and then cartwheeling into a fiery, mangled mass which no one survived.
"They say that the ghosts of those three sisters bitterly haunt Max Patch at night, searching for the orders that would have launched their fortunes. And if someone happens to be hiking up there when the sisters show up.... Well, those three sure don't want anyone else to find the orders and steal their business."
"Is that true?" asked Emily, as they pulled into the Max Patch parking area.
"I don't know," replied Nancy, climbing out of the car. "It's just something I read somewhere."
The light was quickly fading as Barb, Emily, and Nancy started hiking. They followed the Loop Trail to the Appalachian Trail and began climbing.
"Yoo-hoo! Hi-ho!" called out Emily and Nancy in the lead. "Here we come; you bears stay down away from the trail!"
Higher and higher they climbed; the higher they went, the stronger the wind blew. Above the trees and brush, the cold wind chilled their ears and whipped tears from their eyes. The sun sank lower behind the mountains, staining a pink and burgundy band across the sky.
"I hear voices," said Emily. "You don't suppose...."
Peering into the darkness, they could just make out two dark forms coming toward them down the trail from the summit.
"No, it can't be the ghosts. There's only two of them," said Barb reassuringly.
The night grew darker, colder, and windier. At the cut-off trail the girls debated continuing to the summit or returning to the car, deciding to wait and see what the other two hikers did.
"Hello," they called out as the others approached. They could see now that it was a woman in a hooded jacket and a man sporting a trimmed gray beard and wearing a buffalo-checked lumberjack's shirt. Neither answered the girls' greeting; the woman seemed to shrink further into her hood, and the man merely stared at them uneasily.
"Maybe they think we're the ghosts," whispered Emily.
The two went down the cut-off trail, and after a few minutes the girls followed; it would take them right to the car. The darkness closed in so that the shapes of the two hikers below were visible only because they moved. At the foot of the mountain, the two hikers stood in the parking lot; they had no car. The girls slipped quickly into their car and started down the winding gravel road, leaving the man and woman in their dust.
Speculating as to what the couple was doing and where they lived, the girls negotiated the narrow, curving road. The headlight cut a small tunnel of visibility, outside which the dark world ceased to exist. The twisting route through the moonless night demanded close concentration, and the three were startled when they heard a dull thump. The car suddenly lurched over an unseen obstacle and stalled.
"The girls so charmed the most influential restaurateurs that they soon had orders from all the finest establishments in New York City. Elated with this promising beginning, the three decided to return to Hot Springs in style and hired a pilot to fly them to the landing strip on top of Max Patch.
"It was a clear, but moonless night - in late October, I think it was - when the little plane skimmed over the southern Appalachians near Max Patch. The wind had risen, and the pilot struggled to maintain control as he strained his eyes through the darkness to locate the treeless summit. At last the grassy strip came into view. As the pilot banked and circled for an approach, a sudden blast of wind swept unimpeded up the side of the bald mountain, rolling the plane sideways. The pilot tried valiantly to level the plane, but it was no use. The plane dropped suddenly, stubbing a wing tip on the ground, and then cartwheeling into a fiery, mangled mass which no one survived.
"They say that the ghosts of those three sisters bitterly haunt Max Patch at night, searching for the orders that would have launched their fortunes. And if someone happens to be hiking up there when the sisters show up.... Well, those three sure don't want anyone else to find the orders and steal their business."
"Is that true?" asked Emily, as they pulled into the Max Patch parking area.
"I don't know," replied Nancy, climbing out of the car. "It's just something I read somewhere."
The light was quickly fading as Barb, Emily, and Nancy started hiking. They followed the Loop Trail to the Appalachian Trail and began climbing.
"Yoo-hoo! Hi-ho!" called out Emily and Nancy in the lead. "Here we come; you bears stay down away from the trail!"
Higher and higher they climbed; the higher they went, the stronger the wind blew. Above the trees and brush, the cold wind chilled their ears and whipped tears from their eyes. The sun sank lower behind the mountains, staining a pink and burgundy band across the sky.
"I hear voices," said Emily. "You don't suppose...."
Peering into the darkness, they could just make out two dark forms coming toward them down the trail from the summit.
"No, it can't be the ghosts. There's only two of them," said Barb reassuringly.
The night grew darker, colder, and windier. At the cut-off trail the girls debated continuing to the summit or returning to the car, deciding to wait and see what the other two hikers did.
"Hello," they called out as the others approached. They could see now that it was a woman in a hooded jacket and a man sporting a trimmed gray beard and wearing a buffalo-checked lumberjack's shirt. Neither answered the girls' greeting; the woman seemed to shrink further into her hood, and the man merely stared at them uneasily.
"Maybe they think we're the ghosts," whispered Emily.
The two went down the cut-off trail, and after a few minutes the girls followed; it would take them right to the car. The darkness closed in so that the shapes of the two hikers below were visible only because they moved. At the foot of the mountain, the two hikers stood in the parking lot; they had no car. The girls slipped quickly into their car and started down the winding gravel road, leaving the man and woman in their dust.
Speculating as to what the couple was doing and where they lived, the girls negotiated the narrow, curving road. The headlight cut a small tunnel of visibility, outside which the dark world ceased to exist. The twisting route through the moonless night demanded close concentration, and the three were startled when they heard a dull thump. The car suddenly lurched over an unseen obstacle and stalled.
"What was that?" asked Barb."I don't know. I didn't see anything," replied Nancy. "Let's get out and look."
"I'm not getting out!" exclaimed Barb.
"I'm not getting out!" echoed Emily. "The ghosts might be out there!"
"Well, I guess we can just go on," said Nancy, turning the key. "It was probably just a raccoon."
But the car refused to start.
Nancy broke the stunned silence. "Oh-oh. Now what do we do?"
"I think I saw a house just down there," offered Emily. "Maybe someone there can help us."
"Uh, yeah, but that would require getting out of the car," Barb reminded her.
"That's okay, I'll wait here for you guys."
"I think we should stay together," said Nancy, "and we might as well check out the house. It's not doing us any good sitting here."
"Okay, let's go," agreed Barb. "Emily, grab the flashlight."
"I thought you had the flashlight."
"Oh, great. And there's no moon, either. Well, maybe our eyes will adjust. Let's go."
Slowly, three car doors opened and three nervous young women stepped out, eyes wide.
"So where was this house?"
"This way." Emily pointed. "But there's no lights on. Maybe no one's home."
"Let's see what we can find. Everyone stay close."
Pushing aside branches and brambles, they inched carefully down an embankment toward the dim outline of a building.
"Ouch! Here's the edge of the porch," said Nancy, rubbing her shin. "Now where's the door?"
She stepped onto the porch and groped her way along the wall to the doorway. The door stood slightly ajar, and it creaked slowly open under the pressure of her hand.
"Oh," she said, disappointed. "It's just an old, abandoned cabin. Now what?"

"Let's go in," urged Emily.
"Are you sure it's abandoned?" asked Barb nervously.
"I don't know. Let's check it out. Now everyone stay close. Come on."
"Oomph!"
"Uh, guys, not that close. The doorway isn't big enough for all of us to fit through at once."
"Okay."
"Sorry."
"All right, let's try again."
One by one, but still very close, the girls entered the cabin. They wouldn't have thought it possible, but inside it was even darker than outside. Shuffling further into the room, Barb ran into an old wooden table. Catching her balance, her hand knocked against an object on the table.
"Hey look! A candle." And after groping further, "And matches! I think someone must use this cabin sometimes," she said as she struck a match.
The wick caught the flame, and the glow revealed the sparse contents of the room. Beside the table sat a single rickety chair. Several empty Spaghetti-O cans and beer bottles littered the floor. Decorating the walls were cobwebs and a hunting-scene calendar dated 1942. At the other end of the room a shovel leaned against the fireplace mantel.
"Homey," said Nancy wryly.
"Shh! What's that?" whispered Barb.
Outside they could hear footsteps approaching the cabin. Closer and closer the rustling in the brush came, and then a footstep on the porch. The girls huddled together facing the door. The glow from a lantern spread across the porch, and then the shape of a man filled the doorway. The girls breathed a collective sigh of relief when they saw it was the gray-bearded man in the lumberjack's shirt, but before they could address him he let out a yelp of alarm and ran off into the woods blabbering something about the Max Patch ghosts.
"He thought we were the ghosts," giggled Emily.
"Rats," said Nancy. "I thought we'd get some help with the car."
"I wonder where the woman was," mused Barb.
Turning to continue their exploration, the girls carefully pushed open the door to the only other room in the cabin. They jumped as one when a mouse scurried out between their feet. After they caught their breath, they held the candle high and peered into the room. It was empty but for an old iron bed with a stained mattress full of mouse nests. Barb bent down to check under the bed and pulled out a handful of vintage magazines.
"Hmph! Playboys!" she said. "Hmm, I bet I could sell these on eBay!"
"Yeah, if we ever get out of here," Nancy interjected. "What should we do now? There's no help here."
"We might as well stay here tonight," Barb answered. "It's getting cold; we could build a fire."
"Okay, bring some of those magazines over here and I'll see if I can get a fire going."
"What? But they're vintage! What about eBay?"
"What about freezing? Come on."
"Oh, okay."
Grudgingly, Barb handed over a magazine, and Nancy arranged a few crumpled pages and some twigs in the fireplace. The dry tinder caught quickly, but smoke rolled into the room. Coughing, she scattered the materials and extinguished the small flame.
"The damper must be shut," she said. "I'll see if I can reach it."
She reached up and groped for some kind of handle. Suddenly she froze. "Guys, something doesn't feel right here." With a tug, an object thumped to the hearth.
"What is it?" asked Emily.
"I'm afraid to find out, but bring the candle over and give me a hand."
Emily held the candle while Barb and Nancy pulled a very heavy object out into the light. They gasped.
"It's the woman from Max Patch!" Barb managed to choke out. "What...? How...?"
"Bring the light over here," requested Nancy.
It was the same woman, all right, and across the front of her dark jacket was a distinct dusty tire track.
"Whoa!" exclaimed Emily. "Is that what we ran over? I don't think I want to stay here tonight."
"Who put her in the chimney?" wondered Barb. "What do we do now? The guy might...."
Just then they heard the footsteps approaching again.
"He's coming back!""Let's get out of here!"
"Run to the car!"
The girls burst out of the cabin and crashed their way back to the road.
"Where's the car?"
"I can't see a thing!"
"Maybe it was farther this way."
They searched up and down the road, but the car was nowhere to be found. Behind them in the woods, the lumberjack's lantern was coming closer and closer.
"Run!" they all yelled at once.
Down the road they ran, as fast as they could. When their lungs were about to burst, they turned and looked back. All was dark and silent, except for their own labored breathing.
"I think we...outran him," gasped Barb.
"We might as well keep walking and try to get back to town," suggested Nancy.
Clinging tightly to each other's arms, they continued down the road. Soon they saw a light coming toward them.
"Now what?" groaned Nancy.
Breathlessly they crouched at the side of the road until they could see that it was three women carrying a lantern.
"It's women. That feels safer. Maybe they can help us," Nancy said hopefully and stood up. "Hello!"
No answer.
"Hello, can you help us?"
Still no answer, though they were certainly close enough to hear.
"Why don't their footsteps make any sound?" wondered Emily.
Barb stepped out in front of the women. "Hey, we need some help."
But the women stared straight ahead and walked right through her. Barb shivered.
All three turned to watch the strange women walk away, but they had disappeared.
Barb, Emily, and Nancy looked at each other, speechless, then bolted down the road once again. It was a long road, and finally Emily gasped, "Wait! I can't run anymore."
Barb agreed, "I'm getting really tired."
"Me, too," said Nancy, "but what can we do?"
"I think I see something," said Emily. "It's a little shelter."
Just off the road sat a crude three-sided shelter, half fallen down. After ensuring there were no dead bodies, the girls decided to stay there until morning, taking turns at keeping watch.
"I'll take the first watch," offered Barb, positioning herself at the shelter opening.
"Okay," replied the other two sleepily. "Wake us if you hear anything."

Nancy rolled over, stretched, and rubbed the sleep from her eyes. She had to smile. What a coincidence to get the same room at the Alpine Court Motel as she and Tenderheart had when they hiked through two years ago. Barb and Emily stirred in the bed next to hers.
"Hey, you guys," she said. "I had the strangest dream last night. We were driving down from Max Patch and we hit something, and the car stalled."
"Wait," interrupted Barb. "Then we found a cabin, but there was a dead body, and the lumberjack guy was coming after us so we ran back to the car?"
"Uh, yes..."
Emily chimed in, "But the car wasn't there, so we ran down the road and saw the Max Patch ghosts?"The girls looked at each other uneasily.
"Y-Yeah...that was it. That was my dream."

Visit Max Patch and Hot Springs, North Carolina
- Hiking Max Patch Mountain
- Directions to Max Patch along with beautiful photos of the area.
- Historic Hot Springs, North Carolina
- All about the town of Hot Springs, North Carolina, near Max Patch. Find accomodations, shopping, recreation.
- Hot Springs Resort & Spa
- Hot mineral baths, massage, furnished suites, and campground in the beautiful southern Appalachians.
Hot Springs Books
More Ghost Stories
The Appalachian Trail Crosses Max Patch Mountain
I've been on Max Patch a couple of times -- but I've never seen any ghosts. Here's the story of the backpacking trip that took me across the mountain the first time.
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Throw Your Log On The Campfire
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ChrisDay
Jun 12, 2011 @ 1:30 am | delete
- Nice!
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grannysage Dec 12, 2009 @ 9:38 pm | delete
- This is a treasure that needs to be found. A very riveting story. So what about the dead body in the chimney, I wonder. Just a suggestion, you might want to throw in a few more pics to break up the long text sections.
Lensrolled to the Witch Who Danced with Ghosts
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MysticTurtle
Sep 26, 2009 @ 12:44 pm | in reply to BevsPaper | delete
- Thank you very much!
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BevsPaper
Sep 22, 2009 @ 5:37 pm | delete
- You are quite the story teller! Very good!
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MysticTurtle
Sep 15, 2009 @ 7:49 am | delete
- Thanks for including my little story! [in reply to bdkz]
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