Tips For Writing Middle Grade Novels

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You Can Write A Middle Grade Novel

If you have any writing skills at all, you are able to write a middle grade novel. It is easy to do and I'll show you how.

A middle grade novel is intended to appeal to children ages 8 to 12. If you want to write a middle grade novel, the best way to get started is to read lots of them. In this way you gain an instinctive sense of what they are like.

You can find plenty of middle grade novels in your public library. Ask the librarian for recommendations, or check out the list of Newbery Medal winners to know what other librarians thought were the best.

You're welcome to visit my website, LindaJoMartin.Com and view the list of middle grade novels I've read on my reading list.

Because I got into the habit of reading middle grade novels to my two young children, I learned to love this genre, and wanted to write some of my own. I finished the first draft of my first middle grade novel in 2001, and am still doing edits on it. I've written several others since then.



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Learn From Reading Middle Grade Books for Children 

Get Started, And Don't Quit 

...you can do it!!!


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The most important thing to remember when writing a novel is that you cannot quit. Even if you think the story is bad, don't quit. Even if you decide you're the most talentless scribbler of worthless ideas, don't quit. Almost every author goes through a period of hating their novel while they're writing it.

You see, sticking to the project is the hardest part of creating a worthwhile story. Once you quit, you fail. And if you don't quit, you can always keep adding to and editing your novel, until it is something you can be proud of.

You should expect to write something new on your novel every day. If you skip a few days, don't despair - just pick up where you left off. If you're new to writing, you can try for 500 new words daily. If you're ambitious, 1500 words daily would be a great goal.

Whatever word count you choose, remember that the key word here is "daily". Do you realize that if you write just 500 words daily for two months and ten days, you'll have a viable 35,000-word middle grade novel manuscript? Then you'll have something in hand to edit and polish up, and be on your way to novel writing success.

Story Sparkers 

Story Sparkers : A Creativity Guide for Children's Writers

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The Basic Building Blocks Of Middle Grade Novels 

...just stack them up!

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Your manuscript will contain elements that are building blocks for the novel.

Some of these building blocks are:

Words
Sentences
Paragraphs
Scenes
Chapters

When you set your goal to add a few building blocks each day, it is much easier than telling yourself you're about to write an entire novel.

When I wrote my first middle grade novel I made it my goal to write 2500 words daily - which would be the approximate length of each chapter. I decided that each time I sat down to write I'd have a list of five scenes to write. My scenes lasted for about 500 words apiece, more or less each time. And in that way I wrote the entire novel in only 17 days. (The first draft was about 50,000 words.)

Set your goals. They don't have to be as ambitious as mine were. But know what you're planning to do, and where you're headed. Then get started, and give yourself the time to get where you want to go. Stack up your blocks, one at a time, and soon you'll have a middle grade novel manuscript to be proud of.

The Writers Guide to Crafting Stories for Children 

The Writer’s Guide to Crafting Stories for Children (Write for kids library)

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The Writer's Guide to Crafting Stories for Children offers detailed information and an in-depth examination of storytelling and story structure. Books on writing for children sell exceedingly well, so it's surprising that no other book focuses on this important aspect of the craft.

Using examples from classic and contemporary sources, Nancy Lamb explores all the key elements of children's storytelling, from point of view to structure to plotting and pacing.

Taking a hands-on approach, Lamb uses worksheets, exercises, and checklists to show writers how to capture and keep a young reader's attention, whether the topic is fact or fiction.

From the Author
The Writer's Guide to Crafting Stores for Children is the how-to book I always wanted to read but never could find.

This book deals with fundamentals. I explore story ideas and writing and structure. What makes a character memorable and what it is about certain children's books that makes readers keep turning the pages. I discuss beginning, middle and end; premise, theme and tone; dialogue and point of view; conflict and structure; plot and subplot. I also talk about the importance of choosing a voice that enhances your story and the power of using the five senses to add texture and authenticity to that story.

This is a book about basics...a book that shows you how to apply what you learn to your own writing in easy-to-follow, step-by-step detail.

To Plot, Or Not To Plot 

...that is the question.

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Novelists are all different. Some make elaborate written plotting notes before starting the actual writing. Others resist plotting, preferring to write organically, letting the story progress as they do the writing itself.

I've written novels both ways. I like and appreciate both approaches. So don't expect me to say that you have to have a plot, or that having one is limiting and bad. It really depends on what you want to do.

There are many different ways to write out a plot. My favorite way is to decide what the main character's journey is. The MC (main character) starts as one kind of person, then learns, grows, matures, and changes. When I figure out what the character will be like at the end of the novel, I can then decide what the different chapters will be.

I write a simple list of chapters - about 15 to 25 chapters depending on the complexity of the novel. For each chapter I write a brief summary of what I want to have happen, what scenes will take place, where, and with which characters. Then as I write the novel I have this list of ideas to draw on as I write chapter after chapter, easily and without too much guesswork.

Organic writing can be fun too. Try it sometime - you might like it! To do it, just decide who your MC is, put that person in a situation, and start writing. Let your imagination be your guide as you travel with your MC through whatever happens next. It is not difficult, and you may end up with incredibly fun and exciting manuscripts. I love the stories I wrote that way.

So to plot or not to plot - that is your decision, and whichever way you choose to write your novel, you're doing it the right way for you.

Plot and Structure - Techniques And Exercises For Crafting A Plot That Grips Readers From Start To Finish 

Plot & Structure: (Techniques And Exercises For Crafting A Plot That Grips Readers From Start To Finish) (Write Great Fiction)

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The second book in the Write Great Fiction series, Plot & Structure offers clear and concise information on creating a believable and engaging plot that readers can't resist. Written by award-winning thriller and suspense author James Scott Bell, this handy instruction guide provides:

* Easy-to-understand techniques on every aspect of plotting and structure, from brainstorming story ideas to building scenes, and from using subplots to crafting knock-out endings

* Engaging exercises, perfect for writers at any level and at any stage in their novel

* Practical and encouraging guidance from one of the most respected writers publishing today

Full of diagrams, plot brainstormers, and examples from popular novels, mastering plot and structure has never been so simple.

About the Author
A former trial lawyer, James Scott Bell is the award-winning author of The Darwin Conspiracy, Deadlock, Final Witness, and the Shannon Saga series. A frequent speaker at writing conferences, he resides in Woodland Hills, California.

Creating Your Main Character 

...who is this strange person?

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The most important person in your novel is the main character (MC). When you're writing a middle grade novel, your MC should be a child.

Some writers believe that children prefer to read about MC's that are slightly older than they are. So since middle grade novels are for children ages 8 to 12, you can't go wrong with having a twelve-year-old protagonist. However if that age doesn't fit your novel idea, just go with whatever you feel is right. Children will want to know how old your MC is, and it would be good to find some creative way to tell them.

Give some thought to your MC's personality before starting your novel. Write it all down, so you don't forget the details while you're writing your novel. It is very helpful to have a character development sheet to refer to while you're writing. In one novel I wrote there were four children, and I constantly referred to my character development notes to remember things like which child was raising rabbits, which one had dark curly hair and which one was blond, what their cats were named, etc.

Give your child protagonist at least three strong positive characteristics, and one negative one. For example your child could be capable, charming, and talkative... and afraid of the dark. Characters with flaws are much more fun to read about than perfect characters. Children want fictional friends they can identify with and care about.

Interview your character. Ask your character what he (or she) wants the world to know about him. Let the answers bubble up from your subconscious and write it all down. Then ask what he wants you to hide, and why. Ask as many questions as possible, and get to know this person's personality well, as you'll be living with him for months to come.

Creating Characters Kids Will Love 

Creating Characters Kids Will Love

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This book covers - how to find believable story characters, creating a character journal, observing real children for inspiration, transforming fact into fiction, character growth, plot development, a character's internal problems, point of view, heroes, villains, secondary characters, animal characters, adult characters, and historical characters.

Conflict 

...every novel needs it.

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A novel without conflict is boring. Every novel needs characters that disagree with one another, major problems that the characters need to solve, and near the end, a huge crisis.

Since your protagonist is a child, and your readers are children, your novel's climax and other lesser problems should be resolved by the MC, not by parents or teachers. Children want to read about other children that had problems and came up with great solutions for them.

So as you write, you're supposed to be thinking, "what can I do to make it worse for my characters?" Yes, that's not very nice, but who said novelists had to be nice - while writing, at least. Our job is to make our characters suffer, but to give them plenty of room to find solutions and redeem themselves.

The Way of Story: The Craft & Soul of Writing 

by Catherine Ann Jones

The Way of Story: The Craft & Soul of Writing

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Offering an integrative approach to writing all forms of narrative, this illustrated book contains evocative insights from the authors own professional journey. The emphasis on the integration of both a solid craft and an experiential inner discovery makes this writing book unique.

About the Author
Cathrine Ann Jones is an award-winning writer whose films include The Christmas Wife (Jason Robards), Unlikely Angel (Dolly Parton), Angel Passing (Hume Cronyn, Calista Flockhart) which screened at Sundance and went on to win fifteen awards, and the TV series, Touched by an Angel. Ten of her plays, including Calamity Jane and On the Edge, have been produced both in and outside of New York City. Winner of the National Endowment for the Arts Award among others, Ms. Jones, a Fulbright Scholar, has served on the writing faculties of The New School University(NYC), University of Southern California (L.A.), Pacifica Graduate Institute, and the Esalen Institute. Ms. Jones lives in Ojai, lectures internationally and serves as a story and script consultant.

Parts Of A Novel 

...make sure your novel is complete.

A novel has these basic components:

  • Prologue - This is optional. Most novels don't have them but you might decide after writing your novel that it would help to add one. Don't worry about it for now.
  • Beginning - The first page is the most important. This is where you will hook your potential reader, or lose him, so you need an exciting and intriguing start that will make people want to read the rest of your novel.
  • Middle - This is the main section of the novel, consisting of many chapters. You will move the MC from the beginning, through whatever character changes he experiences, to the end where he will be a new and better kind of person.
  • Sub-Plots - Novels are more complex when they add extra plots to distract the MC along the way. These take place in the middle of the novel. Leave the beginning and end for the main plot.
  • Climax - A few chapters from the end you should start building toward your main crisis. This should be the most exciting part of the novel, and it usually happens in the penultimate chapter.
  • Denouement - This is the last chapter. The crisis is over. The character has changed. Now you just have to wrap up loose ends and send your MC and other characters on to their new and better life.
  • Epilogue - I rarely see these in middle grade novels, but that doesn't mean you can't throw one in if it feels like the right thing to do.

Elements of Writing Fiction - Beginnings, Middles & Ends 

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Elements of Writing Fiction - Beginnings, Middles & Ends (Elements of Fiction Writing)

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This book covers the opening scene, the section scene, early revisions, staying on track throughout the middle of the novel, character development, getting unstuck, delivering on the promise, the last scene, the last paragraph, and the last sentence.

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The Business of Writing for Children 

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Writing books for children is both art and business. If you dream of becoming a children's author -- or even if you're well on your way -- this handbook can help you in writing sellable stories, getting them published, and promoting your books. Topics include common myths about children's writing, children's book categories, elements of successful stories, manuscript format, submission strategies, contract negotiation, the publishing process, career building, and children's writer resources. Also included are specialized subjects such as querying for multiple manuscripts and promoting a first book. Read The Business of Writing for Children to learn the secrets you might spend years discovering for yourself.

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Aaron Shepard is the author of Master Man, The Sea King's Daughter, The Legend of Lightning Larry, and sixteen other published and forthcoming picture books. His publishers have included Atheneum, Scribners, Clarion, Lothrop, Dial, and HarperCollins, as well as Cricket and Australia's School Magazine. Aaron's work has been honored by the American Library Association, the National Council for the Social Studies, and the American Folklore Society, and he has been a judge for the Golden Kite Awards of the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators.

Children's Writer's Word Book 

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This title's unique design ensures that writers speak to their audience with a vocabulary and style they both understand and find appealing. A fast-reference guide meant to be used along with a dictionary, thesaurus and yellow pad of paper, it will help fulfill the dream of becoming a published children's writer. --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

About the Author
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Children's Writer's and Illustrator's Market is the top market guide--the bible--for children's writers and illustrators seeking publication.The 2009 edition of this stalward companion offers readers more than 650 listings for book publishers, magazines, agents, art reps and more. Completely updated, it also contains exclusive interviews with and articles by well-respected and award-winning authors, illustrators, and publishing professionals as well as nuts-and-bolts how-to information. Readers will learn what to do, how to do it, and get loads of information and inspiration.

CWIM is the top children's publishing guide with over half a million copies sold.

Completely revised and updated annually with exclusive interviews and articles by top children's publishing professionals.

The 2008 Childrens Writers and Illustrators Market offers readers more than 750 listings for book publishers, magazines, agents, art reps and more. It's completely updated annually and is the most trusted source for children's publishing information. CWIM also contains exclusive interviews with and articles by well-respected and award-winning authors, illustrators, and publishing professionals as well as nuts-and-bolts how-to information. Readers will learn what to do, how to do it, and get loads of information and inspiration."

About the Author
Alice Pope has been editor of Children's Writer's and Illustrator's Market for more than 15 years, frequently speaks on children's writing/publishing related topics at writers' conferences, blogs about children's publishing as CWIM: Alice Pope and is a former Regional Advisor for the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators.

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Sara wrote

Thanks for this information, I am actually writing a story and this is very helpful. I am only in 8th grade but I want my readers to grow to love my characters and want the story to be real, or at least that they are with the characters at the time of their delimma's. This really helped me with very imaginative ways of describing the characters and new plots. I didn't necessarily ask myself "How can I hurt my character?" because it all came together, but I did like that suggestion. Thankyou so much!! By the way your site, 5 stars!

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I love your this site. I haven't written a novel, but a children's picture book. I am looking forward to reading your other sites. I give your 5 stars and would like to rate your site(if I can figure out how to do this). Keep going!

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SusanVillasLewis wrote...

Hmmm. Well, I already know how to read books for the 9-12 year old set. They're among my favorites right now. But it's harder than it looks to write for them!!

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5 stars!! Enjoyed your info. I am writing a non fiction book for 9-12 year old girls. Your site gave me a shot in the arm. Found you thru the Muse Online Forum. Thanks.

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