The Best Squidoo Intros Ever

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Do's and dont's for writing great introductions on Squidoo

An introduction is one of the most important forms of communication. It's just as important on the web as in the offline world. It's your 2 seconds to make a first impression, to greet someone who just landed on your lens -- and keep them reading. It's a big hello to your readers and a way to make their acquaintance.

Online, people are in a hurry. More of a hurry than you imagine. If the promise of your lens doesn't work for them, they leave. What's a promise? A promise is a statement of your intentions, of what they will find here. It comes through in the tone you take, in the art you use, in how much you sound like a real person or an SEO-baiting minion. The first things a reader sees on your lens, which are all very much in your control, are your title, bio, introduction and intro image. If they aren't specific and interesting, chances are people will pass you by (and all the great content you worked hard to write elsewhere on your lens).

To help you out, we decided to study the introductions of hundreds of top lenses to see if we could find characteristics and examples of really spectacular introductions. Believe it or not, these were woefully hard to find, even on many Top 100 lenses in their topics. The mistakes we've seen are... intros that are too long and rambling; too short and nearly empty; weird CSS forced into the intro that looks like bad PrintShop cards a la 1985, loud links to salesy stuff, and straying from the lens topic before the lens has even begun.

Luckily, we found a lot of good examples too. We hope that sharing these with you will help you learn how to make your own intros a little stronger. I can't think of anything more important than making a good first impression on the web -- other than delivering on that impression consistently and honestly once you've made it.

So! Here you go. Here's a list of some of the best intros on Squidoo and few tips on how you can make your intro the best too.

11 secrets to a great introduction module

a few thing we love and a few things we don't

  • 1Introduce what your lens is about. Literally. This first thing is the simplest of all. Telling your audience what you're going to talk about is critical to a great lens. Even if you say quite plainly and simply: "I decided to write this page about sewing buttons on jackets because I find myself doing it a lot, and... bla bla bla." Only making the bla bla bla part great is up to you. :)
  • 2Pose a question. It immediately makes your reader think. Christene does this well in her Countdown to Christmas lens. What are some of your holiday traditions during the Christmas season? Do you count down the days with an Advent Calendar? This way you can answer these questions in the body of your lens.
  • 3Get personal. Tell a story, make us laugh, evoke emotion. Connecting to your reader on a personal level leaves them wanting more. We know that your privacy matters to you, and that digital interactions can feel weird, but we're not asking you to divulge your darkest secrets. Just sound like a human when you write. Sound like you.
  • 4Tell a story. People love stories. Using your intro to tell a story sets up the tone for the rest of the lens and engages your audience.
  • 5Toot your own horn. You heard that right! Tell people why your Etsy hats are selling so well, and that you've sold 200 in the last month alone. Reveal that you have a Masters in Art History when you write a lens about painting. Explain what kind of experience you have with the topic you're writing about. (Important to remind yourself: Experience does not mean expertise. We don't think you have to be a bread baking expert, trained in a french bakery and waking up at 5am to start the dough, in order to write a really interesting and useful lens about the bread you love to bake).
  • 6Keep it SIMPLE. Your intro is exactly that. An introduction to your lens. Keep it to 3-4 paragraphs maximum. Remember you've got an entire lens to work with. Spread it out a little.
  • 7USE GREAT INTRO PHOTOS. Check out our 13 tips for the best intro photos.
  • 8So what's the one thing we don't want to see? No intro at all. No intro photo at all. Or worse, a selfish intro that tries to take advantage of your reader in the first 20 characters. Your lens has something to say. It deserves a strong, passionate and creative intro.
  • 9Use the Table of Contents module. It lives right in your Intro and it's really easy to use. The TOC module has been statistically proven to get people to read more of your lens. And the more they read, the more they click, and the more you benefit from that interaction and interest. Many of the best Intros we looked at took advantage of the TOC module, or the TOC setting that is included directly within the Intro module. Try it.
  • 10Watch the CSS. Really. Just because we allow it in the intro doesn't mean you should go wild with it. Many lensmasters, alas, know enough to be dangerous -- to themselves! CSS is an art, and styling and coloring and emphasizing content is an art. We know you're artists, but make sure you don't over-design your intro (worse, in a way that conflicts with the lens theme) and scare your readers away. Tip: It's not CSS, but try adding smart bolds in places in your intro. Just don't overdo it.
  • 11Bienvenido: Think about how you greet people in the real world. Are you warm? Are you friendly? Do you let people know why you are at their door, or ask why they walked in to your shop? Do you tell them a little about yourself? Of course you do. Your lens deserves the same wonderful, unique, relevant intro that you give in real life.
Important!

Recommended Reading

13 Tips To Great Intro Images. To help you brush up your lenses and find the best intro image for each lens, we've put together a list of our favorite intro photos on Squidoo. We've also written a list of 13 things you can do to improve your introduction photo.

What do YOU think makes a great intro?

  • Atreyusmommy May 29, 2012 @ 1:05 pm | delete
    Great tips thank you. I think that writing a personal story, a great photo, a joke or a question all make a great intro.
  • boubee May 27, 2012 @ 9:41 am | delete
    thanks so much for your tips
    :)
  • Dickstucki1 May 22, 2012 @ 11:07 am | delete
    Thank You
  • Dickstucki1 May 22, 2012 @ 11:07 am | delete
    Thank You
  • HarounKola May 20, 2012 @ 7:12 pm | delete
    thanks for the tips
  • Anna2of5 May 10, 2012 @ 11:45 pm | delete
    I guess just being yourself. There are a lot of really good writers here on Squidoo. They all do things differently from one another, but maybe the key word here is quality. I vascillate from wanting to read everything here, to staring at my bookshelves wondering what wants to be featured today, or what do i bring to the breakfast nook/computer table today. Thanks to all the Squids Angel, Giant, or otherwise who help to cultivate such a wide variety of knowledge here. Checking in every day, and still surprised.
    Sincerely, Anna2of5
  • gonzalezdenise May 10, 2012 @ 9:25 am | delete
    Thank you this information is very helpful.
  • just_Dawn May 2, 2012 @ 7:35 am | delete
    Using descriptive words, correct spelling & punctuation :)
  • designsbyharriet Apr 30, 2012 @ 4:24 pm | delete
    I think it is very important and I always try for humor if the lens can handle it or some grab the audience type of intro. Hope I succeed.
  • 2daymoviesonline Apr 23, 2012 @ 2:18 pm | delete
    be your selff

    www.2daymoviesonline.com
  • 2daymoviesonline Apr 23, 2012 @ 2:18 pm | delete
    be Your Self

    www.2daymoviesonlinen.com
  • danielmccarthy Apr 22, 2012 @ 8:02 am | delete
    Personality.
  • cindywilliams0 Apr 21, 2012 @ 8:01 pm | delete
    Be yourself in a truthful manner.
  • cindywilliams0 Apr 21, 2012 @ 8:01 pm | delete
    Be yourself in a truthful manner.
  • southsidejeff12 Apr 18, 2012 @ 1:14 pm | delete
    Being courteous when introducing yourself
  • southsidejeff12 Apr 18, 2012 @ 1:12 pm | delete
    Honesty
  • MoroccanoilReviews Apr 18, 2012 @ 9:42 am | delete
    great advice!
  • craftycrow Apr 11, 2012 @ 10:26 pm | delete
    Short and descriptive so I can tell if I want to read it or not.
  • DarleneN Apr 10, 2012 @ 1:56 pm | delete
    Short and snappy! Get people's attention right away, and put stuff in that makes them want to read more.
  • DarleneN Apr 10, 2012 @ 1:56 pm | delete
    Short and snappy! Get people's attention right away, and put stuff in that makes them want to read more.
  • mitchell456 Apr 9, 2012 @ 1:50 pm | delete
    When it feels like the writer is talking just to me
  • michaelangelas Apr 7, 2012 @ 3:41 am | delete
    What do I think?
    Well, when you ask me personally, the first thing that popped into my head is the old saying "a picture is worth a thousand words".
    Ok, lets break that down. My mind likes to wander, not to say I bore easily, but..your right, if the top 4 words don't grab my attention, I'm moving on.
    If I see a picture, say on the internet, I don't bother clicking on the link, unless that picture draws me in.
    So, to answer your question? It boils down to a fun, unique, picture that is going to make me want grab a cup of coffee, put my feet up, and start reading.
  • mayawestwood Apr 6, 2012 @ 8:54 am | delete
    Thank you.
  • ettorecolella Apr 4, 2012 @ 2:06 pm | delete
    great advice!
  • ettorecolella Apr 4, 2012 @ 2:06 pm | delete
    great advice!
  • EmmaUlriksson Mar 31, 2012 @ 8:46 am | delete
    Thanks one more time.
  • addbreitling Mar 30, 2012 @ 10:19 pm | delete
    a good intro well say something about the whole. thanks for these helpful tips.
  • H20Panther Mar 24, 2012 @ 10:20 am | delete
    a good intro well say something about the whole. thanks for these helpful tips.
  • fdurham Mar 23, 2012 @ 10:41 am | delete
    Great tips.
  • srsddn Mar 21, 2012 @ 11:27 pm | delete
    Very useful tips.
  • ottnepal Mar 22, 2012 @ 7:10 am | delete
    yes
  • Markstuffnmore Mar 21, 2012 @ 3:36 pm | delete
    Hi, I think your introduction should always have a friendly greeting, a great picture and a brief description of what your lens is about and why you are making it!
  • Libra4all Mar 18, 2012 @ 11:18 am | delete
    good tips
  • hafsa-siddiqui3 Mar 16, 2012 @ 1:45 pm | delete
    it was amazing! :)
  • 829917 Mar 10, 2012 @ 7:44 am | delete
    nice tips
  • 829917 Mar 9, 2012 @ 7:57 am | delete
    thank you for your tips
  • kdneale Mar 7, 2012 @ 7:16 am | delete
    A great intro is something said with a smile. Even a sad subject can be lightened and comforted with a loving smile in the tone of the wording carefully chosen.
  • sanket013sni Mar 7, 2012 @ 6:40 am | delete
    wow . . . thanks for this
  • yundagx Mar 7, 2012 @ 3:22 am | delete
    Great tips!
  • Gabriel360 Mar 6, 2012 @ 12:38 pm | delete
    Great tips!
  • keenanb Mar 6, 2012 @ 5:03 am | delete
    great info
  • AcornHaven Feb 29, 2012 @ 12:00 pm | delete
    Something that catches my attention and makes me want to read further
  • ethelj1347 Feb 14, 2012 @ 12:56 am | delete
    Statement of values & purpose!
  • ethelj1347 Feb 14, 2012 @ 12:53 am | delete
    A statement of values and purpose!
  • CookiesNoCrumbs Feb 11, 2012 @ 6:07 am | delete
    Great tips will be using as a new blogger
  • NicoleCleanGreen Feb 11, 2012 @ 3:48 am | delete
    To Be or Not To Be
  • LampsPest Jan 26, 2012 @ 10:40 pm | delete
    You know I think I really like a good question in an introduction. Thanks for the advice since I am new at this art of makingings a lens.
  • BrianS Jan 16, 2012 @ 4:37 am | delete
    I think you have already described a good introduction and very well. People hate to be sold to but they love to be educated. So if you stop selling and start educating you are more likely to be successful.
  • FunNaturePhotography Jan 13, 2012 @ 5:31 pm | delete
    Lots of great info here and I'll be studying it before creating my first lens. When writing, I always think of the reporter's duty to tell the four W's: "what", "where" "when" and "why". Are there more "w" words? I'm not sure!
  • Kentscorner Mar 5, 2012 @ 3:11 am | delete
    who the other w word.
  • bloomingrose Jan 13, 2012 @ 2:04 pm | delete
    Thanks for the information. I have bookmarked this to come back to so that I can study the "intros" that make it.
  • MarknTX Jan 13, 2012 @ 10:08 am | delete
    I'm brand new to Squidoo so please forgive if this is common knowledge question. I thought the intro module had to be at least 200 words. Is this not true? I've made intros a little longer than I thought necessary because of the '200 word rule'. (If there is such a thing.) So, is there a minimum or is that something you 'earn' with a higher ranking. Thanks!
  • veryirie Jan 12, 2012 @ 6:17 pm | delete
    I enjoy reading a personal tidbit from the author. If they are writing about a book, I want to know they actually read it. I like lenses that are genuine in nature.
  • MCB2011 Dec 31, 2011 @ 11:45 am | delete
    I'm learning quite a bit here that may help. Thanks for the info.
  • couponsworld Dec 24, 2011 @ 1:55 am | delete
    Thanks for the lens. Really Very Help ful.
  • Hafeez75 Dec 23, 2011 @ 7:32 am | delete
    Very nice and informative.
  • garip1 Dec 21, 2011 @ 5:52 pm | delete
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  • EeBooker Dec 20, 2011 @ 4:59 am | delete
    Very helpful article to understand how squidoo work
  • katiecolette Dec 15, 2011 @ 9:44 am | delete
    Simplicity and a good statement of purpose.
  • wordstock Dec 14, 2011 @ 12:42 am | delete
    I have been reading other lenses and see where I have made strides but can do better. Thanks for the tips. Does customizing the bio also help?
  • MeganCasey Dec 14, 2011 @ 4:42 pm | delete
    Customizing the bio definitely helps!
  • PaulOnBooks Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:58 pm | delete
    The clue is in the name - introduce the lens. That doesn't mean duplicate the content!

    Revisit lenses after a few days and check how they show up in search results - you might be surprised how bad theopening sentence(s) look.
  • MeganCasey Dec 14, 2011 @ 4:42 pm | delete
    Excellent advice.
  • EditorDave Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:35 pm | delete
    Good tips. Wish more would follow them. :-)
  • OhMe Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:05 pm | delete
    Oh wow, thank you for featuring Christmas in Pendleton SC.
  • Jewelsofawe Dec 13, 2011 @ 9:50 pm | delete
    Photos plus a personal intro
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:19 pm | delete
    So true.
  • squidoopets Dec 13, 2011 @ 9:34 pm | delete
    Great tips for writing good introductions. In the beginning I found the intros to be the most difficult part, now I copy and paste my keywords in the intro and then form it around them in a readable way. I enjoy doing them now. Another thing I've done is looked at my pages and pretended I am a first time reader- often little things I can fix will pop out.
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:09 pm | delete
    Hey @Squidoopets! The tip about trying to imagine your lens as a first time reader is really great.

    I'm sure you're being smart about the keywords tactic you mentioned, but for the sake of anyone else reading these comments I'll add this: Proceed with caution when it comes to running keywords in your Intros. Your Intro should absolutely talk about the topic of the lens and what the reader can expect to learn there. Precision and focus is good. Just beware keyword stuffing, and don't try so hard to work in key phrases that the natural flow of your writing is obviously stilted.

    Write for humans, not search engines, and you'll be ahead of the game!
  • flycatcher Dec 13, 2011 @ 8:42 pm | delete
    The only thing harder than writing a great intro is writing a good headline. :) I agree that getting a sense of who's writing the lens is one thing that really warms me up to reading more. Thanks for the tips!
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:18 pm | delete
    @Flycatcher: I really enjoyed the Intro on your lens about adopting a retired racing greyhound. (Love the entire lens, as a matter of fact. Well done!). Your intro does a good job of bringing some personal context to the story, and certainly caught my interest to keep me reading.
  • KittySmith Apr 13, 2012 @ 12:36 am | delete
    I feel exactly the same. So many good tips here. Now I am off to go read Adopting a Retired Greyhound. See if I can pick up some tips to tweak my charity lens, Cavalier King Charles Spaniel Rescue.
  • mokiwigirl Dec 13, 2011 @ 8:14 pm | delete
    Some sensible, common sense ideas...all we need to do is put them into our lenses. Thanks
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 9:57 pm | delete
    Hear hear. Doing the work is always the hard part! Good luck, glad to be of help.
  • jaredsgirl Dec 13, 2011 @ 7:51 pm | delete
    Thank you so much for the tips on writing a great lens info. Super helpful and much appreciated.
  • Great_Mom Dec 13, 2011 @ 7:37 pm | delete
    wonderful info...n great examples...
    very helpful indeed :)
  • sanket013sni Mar 7, 2012 @ 6:39 am | delete
    hummmmmm
  • vallain Dec 13, 2011 @ 7:14 pm | delete
    I worry that my lenses aren't eye-catching enough, but I get too impatient to mess with HTML for borders, fancy fonts and flashing lights.Thanks for saying that this is OK not to have these.
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 9:56 pm | delete
    Definitely okay! Simple and clean tends to be best. Fancy borders and fonts and custom colors can often send a reader running. (Bounce rate can be higher on those lenses that really overdo it). Squidoo's got 25 lens themes (with more in the works, always) as a neat and easy way for lensmasters to choose a look they like and express themselves.
  • KokoTravel Dec 13, 2011 @ 6:56 pm | delete
    Great 'tutoring'! Thanks so much!
  • scarlettohairy Dec 13, 2011 @ 6:56 pm | delete
    Great advice. I'll keep this in mind when writing (and rewriting) my intro modules.
  • thebestmousetrap Dec 11, 2011 @ 9:41 pm | delete
    Everything you said sounds 200% right, now, I'm gonna go tackle it. Thanks for the study.
  • eilval Dec 1, 2011 @ 10:01 am | delete
    I'm a newbie here ..... will learn as i go along . Thanks for the informaiton
  • Bartukas Nov 10, 2011 @ 6:50 am | delete
    Great information thanks
  • sanket013sni Mar 7, 2012 @ 6:41 am | delete
    great pleasure after reading this
  • veryirie Oct 15, 2011 @ 2:49 am | delete
    It's always good to read and learn new things here at Squidoo. I'm constantly finding tips that can make a big difference in the quality of my lenses. Thank you!!!
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 10:23 pm | delete
    Love to hear that.
  • cupcakemania Oct 11, 2011 @ 2:12 am | delete
    Thanks! I'm new here, and this really helped :)
  • RenaissanceWoman2010 Oct 5, 2011 @ 9:54 am | delete
    A first sentence that makes me say: Wow! I wish I had written that. Not in a jealous way, but in sheer admiration and respect. I love word wizardry that dazzles me.
  • MeganCasey Dec 13, 2011 @ 6:05 pm | delete
    Word wizardy for the win.
  • jasmine11911 Oct 2, 2011 @ 2:29 am | delete
    Eye catching photos( fantastic colors and unique).A lot of excitement and suspense that people want to read and read MORE....uaaaaaahahaha(the devil's laugh) >:)
  • emre214 Sep 28, 2011 @ 9:27 am | delete
    Really helpful...there was a lot of useful information and examples. Thanks!
  • terriblangley Sep 23, 2011 @ 2:18 am | delete
    ask a challenging question!
  • Luvnit Sep 19, 2011 @ 4:33 pm | delete
    This is so helpful, thanks again!
  • danmont Sep 13, 2011 @ 8:44 am | delete
    Excellent. Just the information I was looking for; I have created two lenses already but I have lots of questions.
  • jac2551 Sep 11, 2011 @ 12:14 pm | delete
    I am a beginner and this is great info. What about humor? TASTEFUL humor!
  • ridakasalim Sep 5, 2011 @ 6:01 pm | delete
    very nice guys....
  • Mrbuel Aug 10, 2011 @ 7:20 pm | delete
    Every one needs to communicate so why not use all the tools that you can.
  • Neoglitch Aug 10, 2011 @ 6:02 pm | delete
    To me a great intro is able to harness that 2 seconds attention span of visitors, and pull them to go through the rest of your content. If your intro really stands out as something interesting, quirky, funny or unique, the visitor will be compelled to read the rest of the lens.

    Great tips on how to write a good intro; I will really have them in mind for my next lenses. Thanks for sharing! :D
  • Shosha123456 Aug 10, 2011 @ 1:10 pm | delete
    Yes , i always believe that first words is the users used to judge about this article
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