Revising and Aditing 101
Will Shetterly
So you wrote a book. Great. What's next?
Revisions.
Aditing (thank you Nell Dixon for that lovely word...)
Submitting.
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A Funny Thing Happened During My Revisions...
What's so funny about that?
Ah, revisions. You never know what you'll find.For example: "His head shook beneath her ear."
Um, huh? Come again? Did I REALLY write that? (Yes, actually I did, and I've been stymied ever since, wondering just what the heckadoodle I was thinking when I wrote that gem.)
Those nifty "What the heckadoodle" moments keep the drudgery of revising at bay. Revisions don't necessarily have to be a serious, something to not anticipate process. A healthy attitude towards the revisions process is the most helpful thing at your disposal.
Revision Tips
1. Keep your sense of humor close at hand. You never know when you're going to come across a gem like the one above. Laugh at yourself, even while you're shaking your head ruefully.
2. You're gonna find boo-boos, so don't beat yourself up about it. We all leave out words, misspell words, can think of a better way to say something, so take heart in your revisions. You don't really want an editor to read something like "His head shook under her ear". Do you?
3. I betcha even Nora Roberts revises. Okay, how much she does is up to debate and open to her personal interpretation of "revision", but I bet she sometimes leaves out words, too.
4. Yes, you need to take the time to at least read through your ms before you submit it. No, it's not your editor's job (if you're lucky enough to sell your ms) to fix YOUR boo-boos. From my own experience editing for my e-publisher, if your marvelous ms is riddled with misspellings, incorrect grammar, sloppy punctuation, haphazard formatting, I guarantee you the editor won't wade through the mess to find the pearl within.
5. Taking the time to make sure your ms is readable (by this I mean your spelling and grammar, etc is spot-on), the storyline flows, the arcs arc the way they should, the black moment is black enough, the HEA is happy enough... all this shows the editor you submit your work to that you have a professional attitude about your writing. A submission that doesn't require a decoder ring does win points, even if it's ultimately rejected.
6. Speaking of the dreaded "R" word...If you've received one where the editor actually takes the time to tell you what he/she thought could stand improvement in your writing, apply that to ALL your manuscripts. Keep track of what you've been told you need to improve, and improve it!
7. It doesn't do any good to dread your revisions. Yeah, they are dreadworthy, but try not to let the revisions know how much you dread them. Seems to make the revisions harder somehow, rather than easier, if you dread 'em. So stop it.
8. Keep a running list of the funnies you find in your mss. (Yanno, like the "His head shook beneath her ear.")
Revising, Editing and Aditing Tips
Things I've Learned...

REVISING, EDITING AND ADITING CAN BE A THREE-HEADED DRAGON OF A CHORE. HOPEFULLY, THESE TIPS WILL HELP.
1. I usually need a few days perspective on any WIP that needs revising, so I generally finish the rough draft and let the WIP sit for anywhere from a couple days to a couple weeks before I tackle the revisions.
2. Chances are excellent that I'm not going to be finished revising, editing and aditing on the first round. What is aditing? It's when you're adding paragraphs, scenes, entire new chapters as you're editing.
3. The valuable input of a trusted critique partner shouldn't be ignored. I'd rather hear my CP tell me something stinks than hear it from an editor in a rejection letter.
4. We've heard this golden chestnut before, but it certainly bears repeating... You can't fix a blank page. You CAN fix stinkified words on a page, however.
5. Revise or edit for specific things if the notion of revising/editing overwhelms you. Revise for emotional depth. Revise GMC for characters. Revise your characterization. Revise for plot holes or loose ends. Revise for overused words. Revise for passive voice (turning it to active voice). Revise for spelling. Revise per your CP's comments.
6. Revisions may be daunting, yes. However, instead of looking at them as a chore, look at the process as a way to improve your writing. You know your transitions or ending hooks need help? Revise with the intention of sprucing those up. There are countless resources on the Internet to help with any aspect of writing you'd like to tackle.
7. Revisions are a necessary part of the writing process. There's always a better word, a more active phrase, a bit of emotional detail that can be added for greater impact.
8. Don't revise your WIP to death. Really. You'll polish your unique voice right out of it. (Um, bad grammar, punctuation problems and creative spelling do not constitute voice. Just saying.)
9. If you're going to join a critique group or have a critique partner, you're going to need a thick skin. You don't want a critique partner who only gushes at your brilliance, you need a CP who will be honest with you. Be sure to set up the parameters of your CP relationship, however, to avoid confrontations, hurt feelings, and to be sure that you're getting the most from the experience as you can. If you join a group, same goes. It's possible for CP's and crit groups to give honest crits that may sting or hurt your pride without being cruel. Cruelty and unkindness are unnecessary. The experience should be helpful, productive and worthwhile. If it isn't, it may be time to find a new situation.
10. Revise, edit and adit with a purpose. If what you're doing isn't improving the WIP, then ask yourself why you're doing it, what purpose does it serve.
Tips for Revising
- Revising Your Novel by J.C. Hewitt
- It's all about revising, baby!
- Revising Your Novel by Waverly Fitzgerald
- More on revising.
- The 10 Point Revision Strategy on MY WRITING LIFE Blog
- Yep, you guessed it---more about revisions. This link will take you to the first point of the 10. Look for more in the sidebar to the right. :D
- Six Ways to Revise Your Novel... by Nina Munteanu
- Again, with the revision tips.
- Tips For Revising Your Manuscript from Writer's Digest
- Sensing a theme? Yep, one last linkie for revision tips.
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