Writing Fiction Tips from Mexico
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A Short Intro
I'm John Warley, a lawyer in my past life but a writer in this one. I started this post to offer some writing fiction tips from Old Mexico.
I have two novels out there: Bethesda's Child and The Moralist. Please don't buy them, and whatever you do don't read them (this is called reverse psychology). Both of them deal in some way with politics, because in my early years politics was my passion, but if you think law isn't fun, try that. I actually ran for public office in my late 20s and lost by a narrow 2 to 1 margin, telling the voters "You won't have John Warley to kick around anymore," or something like that. But the two books are very different, as you will see if you read the Amazon reviews.
I'm currently at work on another book, historical fiction set in South Carolina during the Civil War. Because I'm writing that book in Mexico, and because Mexico is such an interesting place to live and write, I decided to focus this post on writing fiction tips and that country.
I have two novels out there: Bethesda's Child and The Moralist. Please don't buy them, and whatever you do don't read them (this is called reverse psychology). Both of them deal in some way with politics, because in my early years politics was my passion, but if you think law isn't fun, try that. I actually ran for public office in my late 20s and lost by a narrow 2 to 1 margin, telling the voters "You won't have John Warley to kick around anymore," or something like that. But the two books are very different, as you will see if you read the Amazon reviews.
I'm currently at work on another book, historical fiction set in South Carolina during the Civil War. Because I'm writing that book in Mexico, and because Mexico is such an interesting place to live and write, I decided to focus this post on writing fiction tips and that country.
Contents at a Glance
Beautiful San Miguel de Allende
Paradise South of the Border
I fell in love with this place about twenty minutes after I arrived during Easter in 1993. I had traveled by train from Mexico City. The train was not late. If that surprises you, it may be because the Mexicans know better than to post arrival times, meaning the train cannot ever be late. At any rate, the trip took eight hours (the bus takes four, and that ride was my first and only by train in Mexico).Once in San Miguel, I headed straight to the "Biblioteca," the library I had read so much about in the travel guides. There, I met a remarkable woman and writer named Donna Meyer. Donna had been lots of places, done lots of cool things (including a stint on Broadway in Hair), and was a fountain of knowledge about San Miguel. We bonded instantly. When I returned later that summer with my wife Barbara and two of our four children (the older two were in college in the US), Donna became a family friend and inspiration, particularly to my daughter, MaryBeth.
It wasn't long before Donna asked me to join a writers group consisting of her, a friend named Roy Sorrels, and a woman named Barbara, who has since passed away. The four of us got along amazing well and while I think we all benefited some from the experience, I took from it so much more than I was able to contribute. Donna, Roy and Barbara were all published with multiple books while I was still trying to break in. I've met writers that pooh-pooh writers groups, but for me it was an invaluable experience.
I'm still in touch with Donna and Roy, both of whom I predict will find their way back to San Miguel before we all join Barbara in whatever awaits on the other side. But after talking with Donna that day in the Biblioteca, I realized something profound: I'd been looking for San Miguel all my life, and now I had found it.
Photo by John Warley in San Miguel 11/1/2006
5 "Keeper" Writing Fiction Tips
(In Mexico or in any country not your own)
Tips for Expats writing fiction
- 1Keep - your eyes and ears open. The local customs, language, and people are a rich resource for new material.
- 2Keep - a detailed journal. You know the price of tortillas today, but if you write your story 5 years from now you won't remember.
- 3Keep - a schedule that allows you both time to write and time to participate in the local culture.
- 4Keep - coming back to the themes that draw you in, and explore them in greater depth.
- 5Keep - asking yourself what will probably happen; then ask what could happen. The "could" is usually more interesting.
Mexico
A Unique Country
Before I came to Mexico for the first time in 1993, I read a quote that has stayed with me (although the name of the quote's author has not). "If you come to Mexico without patience, you will learn it. If you come to Mexico with patience, you will lose it." I have found this to be completely and totally TRUE.Mexico is currently in the news for all the wrong reasons--drug wars, cartel feuds, kidnappings, decapitations, assorted violence. And while these all happen, I am happy to report that they happen a very long way from where I live, which is in San Miguel de Allende. San Miguel is in the central plateau about 200 miles north of Mexico City. I fell in love with the place twenty minutes after I got here in 1993. It is an old city dating back to 1541, when it became a crossroads for silver mining routes. The weather here is, in a word, perfect. Its downtown, the "centro," has been a national monument for a century, so little has changed since the days of Pancho Villa. I will be talking about San Miguel frequently in future postings.
My writing studio is on the third floor of a pretty condo. Photo attached, and yes, the view is so inviting that I must sometimes close the curtain to get any serious work done.
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Stroll in the Mexican Countryside
John and his amigo
Now this photo has a bit of age on it (the burro looks much older today, with a sway back and advanced arthritis). But this was taken just a block from "civilization." As for me (the one on the right), I'm in a coat and tie because I have just returned from my teaching duties at the Tech de Monterrey in Queretaro. If memory serves, I was telling a story that bored my children, and clearly bored the burro.
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JohnWarley
Feb 13, 2012 @ 4:49 am | delete
- Bob: Your memory seemed pretty good in the 101 in the 1940s Lens I looked at and commented on. I didn't begin a journal until my mid-40s, but of course wish I had started it much earlier. At least I saved old letters (something e-mail seems to have replaced), so I can reconstruct what otherwise might have been lost. There is an area of NE London just off the M-?? named Warley, noted at one time primarily for it's insane asylum, since torn down I believe. When my daughter was in her junior year abroad in college at the U. of Reading, we spent a pleasant day there--in Warley, not at the asylum. Thanks for posting your comment.
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BobBlackUK
Feb 13, 2012 @ 2:20 am | delete
- Nice lens. John. I like your Writing Fiction Tips, particularly #2. I started a journal when I was a schoolboy, but like many "fads" of that time I didn't keep it up. Now I like writing about my early life, I have to rely on memory and that lets me down more and more these days. Good luck with your new book!
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Pammyjo
Feb 7, 2012 @ 1:46 pm | delete
- I linked to your site through Face Book; love your intro! I will look for your books on Amazon and share them on my book group page 'What's In Your Head'. Feel free to join if you are on FB. I am curious, as a native South Carolinian, why, other than The Shot That Was Heard Round The World, you chose our wonderful state as the setting of your Civil War novel? Best of luck!
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JohnWarley
Feb 7, 2012 @ 6:12 pm | delete
- Hi, Pam:
A native, eh? From where in SC do you come? Beaufort's experience during the Civil War was unique, and rich for the novelist that can capture that time. I hope to be that novelist. Thanks for commenting on Squidoo--it is a site I think you'll enjoy. Please do check out Amazon reviews for Bethesda's Child and The Moralist. I've been lucky with reviewers. I'll check out the FB page.
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Pammyjo
Feb 8, 2012 @ 9:46 am | delete
- I downloaded The Moralist to my Kindle and will share the link on FB. Maybe I should have said as a niave South Carolinian? I am in the Upstate Region, Greenville/Spartanburg/Anderson Area. After seeing your bio, I realized your connection to SC. (I am working on reading instead of scanning for future reference) Good luck on That Novel (great and important words should be caps, don't you think?)
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JohnWarley
Feb 8, 2012 @ 3:24 pm | delete
- Pam: For downloading The Moralist and the FB post, i Thank You (see? I agree that important words should be in caps). I can't find you on FB because you aren't Pammyjo and there are several "what's in your head?" so I'm a bit lost. But I see from Squidoo that you have three or four full time jobs, including wanna be write, so go for it (if you can find time). I liked the Patton comment BTW.
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OhMe
Jan 31, 2012 @ 2:39 pm | delete
- !yad drawkcab yppah!
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OhMe
Feb 1, 2012 @ 7:56 am | delete
- Yesterday was backwards day so I was telling you "Happy Backwards Day" backwards. lol
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emonanam
Jan 21, 2012 @ 8:41 am | delete
- This is call Opening ! Great start . Congrats for such a nice lens.
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JohnWarley
Jan 21, 2012 @ 9:11 am | delete
- Thank you for visiting and commenting. I just took your tour of Bangladesh. Fascinating.
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