How to Write Titles that get Results Every Time

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Stop! Do Your Headlines have this Effect?

Every day thousands of people are battling for your attention. You are bombarded with hundreds of ads, marketing messages, news stories and emails each and every day. There is an ongoing war for your attention.

So, how do you expect anything you write to capture your prospective readers attention? How can you convince them to take time out of their lives to read your message?

Of course the first step is to engage them, and the best weapon at your disposal is a killer headline. A headline that screams 'Stop! You must read this!'

I will cover three proven psychological headline triggers (I will refer to as Stop Sign Effects) that cause a reader to stop and take notice, and teach you exactly how and why they work.

Stop Sign Effect #1: A Question as a Title 

When tested, Question based titles absolutely massacre Statement based titles.

Examples:
Do you make these common web design errors?
Do you know the reasons why most titles suck?
Is your email inbox driving you crazy?

Consider this, which would be more likely to capture your attention:

Consumer Study: findings on average bank fees.
or
Are you paying higher bank fees than the rest of us?

Why does this work? The answer is simple and you are probably already aware of it - you want to know the answer to the question. An unanswered question irritates the brain, the only relief is to know the answer.

Stop Sign Effect #2: A Problem as a Title 

Once you understand the benefit of a question based headline it's time to take it up another notch.

Most advertising is solution based. However, problem based titles are far more alluring to readers than solutions.

Examples:
Struggling to make Affiliate Sales with CJ?
Is your websites bounce rate off the chart?
Want to increase your Adwords CTR?

Including a problem in the title irritates the brain even more, and identifying with the problem in the title means you are much more likely to read on to discover the solution and put your mind at ease.

Stop Sign Effect #3: Curiosity in the Title 

Spark curiosity in the reader by giving them a taste of what's to come. Words like 'This' and 'These' do it well. If your title is 'Do you use these top 3 attention stealing effects?' - you might have some idea what these are, but you will never know for sure unless you read on.

'How To' and lists are also great way to get a reader curios.

Examples:
Do you make these 7 common Adwords mistakes?
Do your titles use these killer tactics?
3 easy ways to improve your copy writing in under an hour

The Stop Sign Title - Bringing it all Togther 

Keep in mind that you don't have to use all three effects in every title you write, you can get away with just one or two most of the time. However, for the full Stop Sign effect the more you can use the better.

A lot of people make the mistake of learning a new skill, understanding and appreciating it completely but never put that new skill to use.

Practice makes perfect, you should have many opportunities every day to practice - whether you're submitting an article to Digg, writing a Blog post or even chirping away on Twitter, you can put these title effects to use.

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What Say You? 

MonkeyWrench wrote...

Thanks SweetPeaches, another commonly used way to attract attention is to use an attractive avatar :)

ReplyPosted August 07, 2008

sweetpeaches77 wrote...

Interesting concept. An intruiging title does have this effect. (Made me click this lens after all) :)

ReplyPosted August 07, 2008

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ReplyPosted July 15, 2008

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ReplyPosted July 11, 2008

MonkeyWrench wrote...

Thanks for the kind words :)

ReplyPosted July 11, 2008

 
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